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waaaaahhh how could you end it there??!! *sob* ahhh but i'm so PROUD of you!! you wrote a MY SIZE chappie :p it was a great one too, full of sexual tension and sweet longing... ahh the guys trying to deny their feelings is cute.. i really loved the part where shippou drew inu and kouga together.. and i love the attention to shippou's artistic ability too ^___^

inuyasha and the star part gave me a beautiful imagery.. i kinda had goosebumps thinking about it... and kouga and the blanket.. lol! so kawaii... hmm does the northern tribe suspect anything between kouga and inu yet?? will they? i suppose that'll be addressed in the future though, since they'll hafta get kouga outta that marriage :p

oh yeah, and i really liked this line:
"draping his arm over the Inuyasha he wished was there"

now kouga's unconscious again! i wanna know what happens next!! pleeeeaaassseeee don't leave us all in suspense too long *sobsobsob*

and now that i've read some inuyasha again, i wanna write on unexpected ally ... HA!! you know how it goes :p

love ya woman, hurry up and write! *cracks whip*

~ Crys

omg! that was adorable!!! i love this story!! it's very well written too!! nice job!! i hope you continue!

*glares at last review* For some fucked up reason, my last review didn't show up, so here I am again! Now, I just love your story, and your right, there aren't enough Inuyasha/Kouga stories out there. I'm so glad that you decided to write this. It's really interesting and entertaining. I can't wait for more, so keep up the amazing work. ^.^

yo girl, thought i'd give it a lil readthrough again now that it's NOT 6am... *cough* anyway, i like that you're goin back to tell the story of how they got together, and it seems to me shippou's already suspicious of inuyasha's intentions for going to see kouga... does inuyasha know his intentions yet? lol! but now you've ended on somewhat of a cliffie! arrggggh and i KNOW how busy you are so... graaah you're such a tease :p *uses goddess powers to make 40 hr days so you have time to write* heehee (say that laugh in the eiji way.. can't you just *see* the half-cocked cheeky grin??)

*huggles* good job, i'll try to be patient for more...

~crys

Wow! That was awesome!! I hope you do another chapter!! Please continue!!

ieeeeeeeee motto motto!!!! you are so awesome!! that chapter was totally boobs and bear!! i loved it and i cant wait for more! woooot!!! iy was so cute all gettin snuggly ^____^ hahahahaha cant wait cant wait!!!! i love ya girl, keep up the good work!! you ROCK!
praise Tezuka- even the pimpin Tezzie!
-ren

hawt. i loved it. <3

I love it. I hope you write a sequel, because there can't be enough Inu/Kou fics.
I'd love to read how they finally got over their animosities, but any kind of sequel is fine with me.

Very nice, very descriptive... the summary of the entire series at the beginning was a bit long, but a nice intro for anyone who hasn't seen Inuyasha before... please continue writing, I like it!!