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by Houseki

schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AFf readers are bad on reviewing, sigh! Anyway I was bored so I went and just looked at old fics came across yur and I wanted to say good story, plot and writing style. Sorry you didnt finish the meeting story- cheers
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this fic..... i find it endearing and sweet.....inu and kouga together are so cute,sexy, and wickedky hot especially since inu is seme......please update soon.

much respcet

Sexy Sesshy
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay, so glad you wrote another chappie so soon! (gotta get it in for the anniversary/birthday ne?!!) and that was a hot interlude, i must say (as much of a tease as it also was, to hint at what happened "next" in the past, but not tell us yet!!) and, dude, their interaction is so cute! haha, inuyasha luffs undressing kouga so much that kou forgets how to do it properly himself? *gigglesmirk* and them washing each other was very sweet/sensual. me like! the smut was hot, and i gotta say...i love rimming in lemons, but i couldn't help but giggle at: Inuyasha dipped his head in to take a sniff of home. that made me giggle, dude, cuz it was SO DOGLIKE lol *loves inuyasha's doglike tendencies*

kyaaa, what're they doing in a couple weeks??!! *has suspicions but doesn't wanna say unless you throw in a twist that makes me HORRIBLY WRONG* lol....

nyaaaa, write more now! pleeeaaaasseeeee!! i wanna know what happened/happens next!!

&hearts
~ lg
person ren
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehe yess.. happy birthday Home! i am glad you got another chappy out for it...very good, Miss Houseki.
it is cute that Kouga cant undress himself *laughs*
still able to worry about the clothes when all that is going on... damn good control Kouga.
yuummmyyyy nekkidness... i love the bathing scene.
"Kouga was panting slightly from the pleasure he was receiving" i love how feral and hot that sounds.
"Inuyasha grinned triumphantly at his lover’s string of swear words directed at him, all with love, of course." hahaha of course
effin hot lemon dude. like srsly
and that a hungry stomach had made itself known..that is funny to me.
good chapter. and you know i am going to say "motto motto!"
so..
MOTTO MOTTO ONEGAI!
hehehe
i cant wait to see what happens next! woot woot wooooooot!
hurry and write more yo
*chu*
ren
person Maytia_TheSorecess
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have been waiting to see this update forever i cant wait to see what they to do that has kouga-kun so nervous and what that other wolf tribe tries to do to get inu-chan to leave kouga-kun alone.......PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yayayay, FINALLY a new chapter! how CONVENIENT that you posted this after that lil discussion of ridiculous xovers and how i needed GOOD inuyasha yaoi..lmao..

so, of course i read the chapter first to beta..but i really wanted to reread the whole fic before reviewing cuz..er..i sorta forgot what the last thing that happened was -_-; heh..SO!! in the last chapter, you had left us with a rather ominous cliffy! i see how, after rereading it, that you had done the last scene in kouga's perspective alone, and then this new chapter is all about what inuyasha was doing while kouga's was doing his own thing in the last one. WOW dude..gahh, i just love the chemistry in this fic. it *almost* makes me wanna read more inu/kou fics but...i just don't think they would appeal to me like yours does!

ok so, before all the drama with the birds started: i LOVED inuyasha saying 'aye', it was totally cute. i love how that sounds in his voice in my head. the image of inuyasha spraying that stuff and running away fast CRACKED me up, hehehe. LOVE the play on words with shippou smelling something "fowl" xp then *gasp* inuyasha saves his man from the bird demons! i love kouga's clan immediately letting inu handle the sitch lol. and, once again, DOCTOR INUYASHA TO THE RESCUE!! haha, too cute. carrying kouga away bridal style--very sweet. and shippou's threat to the northern tribe-- &hearts!! also, "his inuyasha was growing up" heeheeee, too cute! i love how mature shippou always seems/talks in his monologues (even in the show) compared to how childish inu sometimes is lol

and now you leave us with a rather ominous end: the northern tribe out for shippou and inu's demise. hmm, somehow, i don't think they will succeed xp BUT I WANNA SEE HOW THINGS PLAY OUT, LIKE *NOW* SO WRITE MORE SOON!! and by soon i don't mean within the next year >.>

XD
&hearts u!!

~ lg
person loche606
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my tezuka! it is so awesome to see this updated! i squee'd with glee dude.. like srsly!
hehehe a tall shippou cracks me up for some reason. i bet he is totally cute.
“Aye. Scope out the land, ya know?” that is totally cute. Inu sayin Aye... hehehe cute cute
“It just doesn’t add up. Sure, the demons have become a bit more peaceful lately, but this is just downright strange. There’s barely anyone around,” THIS is SUCH an Inuyasha line! wow.. i can hear him saying it.
"I have to spray and run otherwise it gets on me " hahahahahahaha!! i can totally see this too..
like... inu gettin some on him and FREAKING out.
mmm actiony goodness.. i love chapters like this..
Ahhh the Wind Scar.. that overused, but still awesome move.
awww he is so gentle with Kouga's wounds! cuteness
ohhh my Shippou and his threats!
"His Inuyasha was truly growing up." that is effin cute! (i wonder how many times i can write cute in one review!

Yeah.. good luck Northern Tribe! whatev... Inu will Adamant Barrage you and THEN you will be in trouble!
awesome chapter. i am glad you got your muse back *chains muse to your ankle*
cant wait to see what you come up with next!
love ya
renaru


person KikyouKagomeKougaInuYashaItachiNejiNarutoSasukeSakuraTemariAngel
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! And I agree, there really aren't enough InuKou Fics. I love this fic! Believe it!
person JewlzGem
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. A cliff hanger too. Sheesh I cant wait for the next chapter. This is one of those stories that keeps you on the edge of your seat, just waiting to find out what happens next. Great work and I am very interested to find out how you pull this all togther.
person cm34
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a mess double time