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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a totally different pairing! *grins* happy to see Hitan
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great writing! A very unusual pairing. I believe this is the first Hiten/Nar pairing that I've read. I love how you have made the story dark and sensual, while tinged in violence. I really enjoyed it.
Rinseternalsoul
Rinseternalsoul
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update that was so good
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an awesome begining with great dialogue and good description. I hope I don't have to wait too long for the second chapter! This is a pretty original fic too, considering that the pairing is so frickin' rare. *Tugs her hair* But thank god for you! And although Manten didnt get any love, I can't say I'm disappointed =3
hehehe Update soon, damnit!
hehehe Update soon, damnit!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heehee, that was cool. W00t for NarakuxHiten. ^_^
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh that was wonderful and quite HOT!! You paired up my two favorite dark bad boy hotties. I loved the dialog between Naraku and Hiten, that was excellent! Wonderful job on this!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like to inform you that I am madly in love with you now. There need to be more stories with Hiten out here, and to my delight you didn't totally neglect Manten in this piece either (you're so right, he does need more love). Hopefully you'll write another chapter, and with both the Thunder brothers starring instead of merely Hiten... Please?
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! :D More Naraku/Hiten LUVIN! XD ;)please? O:-)
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I wish there were more stories with the thunder brothers. This one was great, here is hopeing you update it;)
Keep it up!!
Yaoi rules
Keep it up!!
Yaoi rules