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for Sumimasen

by bebopsfeje

person sel
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmmmmmm oh god that was a hot little dream sessh...

*I wants*

Sel~

*waits patiently for more*
person Sayuri-chan
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*rofl* I'm sorry, it's not funny, but this chapter just made me laugh so hard! Well, the end, not really the beginning or the middle, just the end. *laughs so more* It's awesome, please keep up the great work! Update soon!
Sayuri-chan~
person mirina
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it has a wonderful start and i'm very interested in seeing what direction this piece takes. I love that your grammer and spelling are just about perfect. It's a breath of fresh air!
person sel
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good, can't for more....

sel
person Kage Tenshi
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! More wonderful chapters. Please update soon.
person Sayuri-chan
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it's great so far. And good job lengthening chapters. Ah, Kagome chan and Sesshoumaru sama...although he didn't say anything about what happened to Rin, though you did mention her in the third chapter. Well, update soon! I love it!
Sayuri-chan~
person Sayuri-chan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH! SO GOOD! This is a great starting chapter--and quite unusual too! Please update soon!
Sayuri-chan
person Kage Tesnhi
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Poor Kagome. This sounds like it's gonna be really good. Please update it soon. *puppy eyes* I must have more to read.
person FayeMegan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! I like it, very cute.. short chapters though! Can't wait to see what happens next. Good job!!!