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for Kagome’s Torment

by DarkroseLelix

person Arishia
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! U BETTER UPDATE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS I BEG OF U !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLS PLS PLS PLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sakura
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was good...hurry up annd update I want to see what will happen next ^.^=
person Kags
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
person ChaosD
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a good start, but you might need to go back over it and fix the grammar errors and it looked like you had a lot of words that were missing in sentences, but besides that i liked it, update soon