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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story i can not wait for the next chapter. arigatou
dewa mata
dewa mata
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! that was very good. the spelling n grammar in chap 1 were poor but it got so much better now. more morem more!!!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I HAVE A FEELING THAT I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, please update soon!!!!
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do like the story so far, and I hope you update soon ^^.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ whooo that was sooo cool! update soon!
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...are you gonna update anytime soon?
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story looks very interesting. Please update soon.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN
EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE
EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please do fix the grammer, and this story, though not half as bad as some I've read, does need some improvement. However, I did enjoy what I was seeing, please do continue, now won't you? Some things that'd make this story better include: Stop repeating the begginings of your paragraphs, only one person should be thinking, or talking in any paragraph, and, most important, you must show, in more detail, what the characters are seeing, and feeling.
Still, I did like this story, and I do hope you continue soon. Ja Ne.
Still, I did like this story, and I do hope you continue soon. Ja Ne.