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for Learn to be Lonely

by Torne

person chanda
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am not upset that your not going to continue this, I agree it was absolutly beautiful, I also know the song and it fit perfectly with this story, good choice....

chanda
person miz_witch
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and I thought it was perfect as a one-shot. You'll probably get a lot of people telling you to build on it, but I really would encourage you not to. Everything that needed to be said was said and it was beautiful in its simplicity.
person If you stop my name will be your assaian
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No don't stop now, you have me in a trance please write more.
person shippo
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! please continue this story!! it's soooo awsome!!! i really like it. it would be an interesting story

thanks
shippo-chan
person gittelbug
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i always thought this song fit inuyasha really well. I think this was a really good one shot becuse despite what we all want.. can inu and kagome really be together in the end? anyway good work!
person inugirl
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love it! Keep going :), would love for him to learn how to not be alone :)
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Full story, please.
person kit master
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea make it longer, it's too gooooooood to leave it there
person gv
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have that soundtrack so i listened to it and it fits but it is sad...and too short. please make more
person gv
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have that soundtrack so i listened to it and it fits but it is sad...and too short. please make more