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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was beautiful, many people are suckers for the waff and the happy ending and have to have it spelled out for them. in my own mind this is a frozen moment in time and the outcome can take any direction... all i have to do is imagine it.
thank you,
ginny
thank you,
ginny
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I didn't think crappy authors could get so conceited. "It is beautiful in its simplicity and perfection should not be tampered with." What the hell? Here's a note: it wasn't really touching. Or simple. Or perfect. It seemed really forced, like you were trying too hard to make it artistic. And your grammar and punctuation isn't very good. Overall, it was pretty mediocre.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow..!!
i read your author's note and you're quite right.
the simplicity of the fic shouldn't be tampered with
it is beautiful in its own way
and even though i would love it if you continued
i can see why you would choose not too.
i look forward to reading more of your stories
thanks for leaving me feeling warm and fuzzy
even if inuyasha cant tell kagome how he feels when shes awake
he can always loosen up a bit as she sleeps.
this was absolutely magical!
- rin.dee
i read your author's note and you're quite right.
the simplicity of the fic shouldn't be tampered with
it is beautiful in its own way
and even though i would love it if you continued
i can see why you would choose not too.
i look forward to reading more of your stories
thanks for leaving me feeling warm and fuzzy
even if inuyasha cant tell kagome how he feels when shes awake
he can always loosen up a bit as she sleeps.
this was absolutely magical!
- rin.dee
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is one of the most beautiful pieces i have read in long while, I look forward to reading your oher fanfics :)
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was very sweet and sad... Although it would be nice to see the story continue on, I do feel that you were right not to continue. It would neglet the original theme and take away the meaning. Well done, however. :)
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you to all of you who reviewed!!!!! It means so much to me, and it makes me want to write even more, oh and Rhiannon, I'm sorry I made you cry!! ~hands her tissues~
~Love Always Torne
~Love Always Torne
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one made me cry. seriously, it was beautiful...maybe it was just the mood i was in or something but i couldnt help myself. Itd be awesome if you kept writing it but i like the way its short and sweet and the song goes well with it too...i dont think itd be as powerful if it was longer. anyways, awesome job :)
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the props! *blushes* I'm glad that I could positively inspire you, even if it meant leaving your work alone. One should not tamper with perfection.
Thanks again!
Thanks again!
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, what a sweet story. nice job :) :)
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats so sad, but very beautiful.