schedule
September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a fan of the short chapters at all. It took me five minutes to read your first three chapters. But, other than that, I think it has potential. Break up your paragraphs a little more, but keep up the writing! No, seriously...keep it up!
schedule
September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad can you write more
schedule
September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it^_^ update soon
schedule
September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved where you going but sad Pleaaaaaassssssse hurry
Part Angle [ another name of mine]
Part Angle [ another name of mine]