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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote to add Riku, Yusuke and teenage Koenma to the harem. I don't really care for Touya, Karasu, Kougaiji, Sirus and Conri, sorry. ^^;;
Touya is from YYH yes? Where are the others from? Are they originals? If they are, I prefer the canon chars better. If they're canon characters too then I can't picture them in my mind so I have a hard time relating to them that's why I don't really like them that much for them to be in the harem. :D
Touya is from YYH yes? Where are the others from? Are they originals? If they are, I prefer the canon chars better. If they're canon characters too then I can't picture them in my mind so I have a hard time relating to them that's why I don't really like them that much for them to be in the harem. :D
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't hate me but I found another one of your errors. (Please don't hate me!)
"If you can defend both yourself and a submissive than you pass the physical part."
It should be "... submissive, THEN you pass..."
and "rather then" should be "rather THAN"
You keep switching then for than and vice versa. ^.^ Ah, and it's "could HAVE", NEVER EVER "could OF". "Could OF" will be forever and ever grammatically wrong.
"If you can defend both yourself and a submissive than you pass the physical part."
It should be "... submissive, THEN you pass..."
and "rather then" should be "rather THAN"
You keep switching then for than and vice versa. ^.^ Ah, and it's "could HAVE", NEVER EVER "could OF". "Could OF" will be forever and ever grammatically wrong.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Kagome! She had twice the amount of meat... I mean, SUBMISSIVES her father and brothers have! :D
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why can't Kagome have children? That's not good. That makes me sad. :( That sucks. :( I want Kagome to have little baby angels with Sephiroth.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol! I don't mind. Maybe in my mind it's becauase I can argue that Kagome and Hiten aren't really real and they aren't really real siblings in the series, but I didn't mind. Their kiss was hot. I want more of that please. :P
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens! I hope you update soon!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is great! So complex and yet simple in a way. You are an absolute genius. Please update soon :)
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. this story keeps on giving! i love it. Im glad Kagome is begining to open up to her feelings and dealing with her pain. Update soon!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Juhu ^^ I`m so happy for this Chapter. Its awesome. I wonder what the others will do now that Kagome is up ^^ So please contine this Story and update soon ^^ I Love all your Storys and have all under favourites so please don´t disapoint me and contine with your Storys ^^
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