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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww man... i think you forgot someone... the prince of saiyajins, vegeta.... and maybe one with naraku or kouga in it... im just throwing ideas out for ya... pretty interesting story though...
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
could this actually be classified as a story? i mean it just seems like self-inserted porn. sorry, it just isn't working for me.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make it Inuyasha and Kagura please please please. I really love that pairing so PLEASE.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the first two, and the overall concept you've got going here. Why not follow up with that keiko and Yuskay that you noted in the second chapter? Or just a Keiko lemon? Either way, I'll be happy to see the next chapter.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay that was hot! The nexted pairing should be Kagome and Sango, but thier flexibilty is unmatched by no other. With some other hot guy!
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN GIRL!!!! Wow... I loved the second chapter... I would fuck Ed so hard... lol. Obviously who wouldn't. Any way, I think you're writing is great. Keep it up and I think maybe for one of your girls, you should use Armitage. She's hot...*grins* yeah she's hot.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved that chapter!!! a threeway with sesshoumaru and inuyasha would be cool!!!