rate_review Reviews

This story started a bit slow for me but, in the end it took off something spectacular. Kudos, keep up the good work.

Wow! Nice one shot. You did a good job XD

that was the 2. best one shot ive red so far and i have redd plenty of them u shud be honored. greate work and exselent writing keep it up and write more of thows 1 shots or u can try a long one with this type of 'fucking' entertenmant. maybe a high school that the 2[inu and kag] met for the first time and make inu be the one ho comes to her school and not the other way around i get a littel tierd of those all the time, and maybe make him scare the hole class with his personalety and have him make eye contact with her at the very beginning. make him go insainly jelous of hobo how is trying to win her hart by being nice and boring. it's just a beginning i have been thinking of and had to get out, sorry if im boroing u but if u find an intrest in the id, mail me at bastardomega@yahoo.no and i can help u with some id's. AND remember the NO, not the COM at the end of my e mail. think aboute it and contin'u your writing 8-)

Peace & Love BastardOmega X-D

that waz great i loved this story r u gonna do more with it i think u should

Wow... hot. Not nearly fluffy enough, though. He never said he loved her... and it sounded like she was just one in many. Not the best I've ever read, it would probably be better as an orriganal fic (everybody seems OOC).
I'm babbling now and I have to go.
-Kirah Keeper Of Ice

OMG, please take a day off and write some more! Yuuummy :)

Very sweet! Loved it!

That truly was comical. Some parts...I just could not
stop laughing. Other parts were steamy. A few grammar
errors, but otherwise it was a fun read.

lol, niiiice. i fact, this was a learning opportunity for me, i dont think i've heard all of those words before! lol! nice oneshot ;)

I really like this