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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You don't speak english as a first language, do you? Your spelling is making me want to cry, and the abuse of similar-sounding words is just a crime. Please have someone help you with this. It's got a good start, but it's very hard reading with all the errors.
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An amusing little story.
However, I noticed that you tend to use the wrong words here and there. You spelled them right, so spell checker won't catch those type of mistakes. Some examples would be "filling" instead of "feeling", "grown" instead of "ground", "site" instead of "sight", "refereed" instead of "referred".
Despite this, I still want to read more. Update soon.
However, I noticed that you tend to use the wrong words here and there. You spelled them right, so spell checker won't catch those type of mistakes. Some examples would be "filling" instead of "feeling", "grown" instead of "ground", "site" instead of "sight", "refereed" instead of "referred".
Despite this, I still want to read more. Update soon.
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Would have been interesting if not for all the grammar mishaps.
It made it harder to read than it should have been. Maybe if
you go back & beta it?
It made it harder to read than it should have been. Maybe if
you go back & beta it?
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wont Sesshomaru to fall in love with Sango her you know new self in that one call her Sango Moon...please