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*snickers* i love this chapter, your characterisations are quite lovely. I cannot wait to see how everything plays out now that she has started training, I'm sure Genkai will push her to her limits yet Kag's will more than stand up to the challange. Wonderful chapter, update soon please.

Wonderful story...I love it.

I'd never have guessed English wasn't your first nor second language, you write wonderfully. And if you do share tidbits for correct cultural info, I know I would appreciate it.

Thank you and please hurry with the next chapter!!

I am really digging this story. I love Genkai's attitude and can see where she and Kagome could become very close. I do hope that you update soon.

What a great chapter! Much tension with the Hiei and Kagomeness...:: heart!! :: Anyhoo, it's another awesome chapter and I love the way this story is going, as for information you may provide for us, I, for one, would appreciate any information you could give. I am currently studying with my Sensei Green at my college, and am learning more and more language wise every lesson. I did take a culture class over the summer, but I would still love to hear anything you'd like to share with us. ^^ Keep up the great work on the story though, I love it!!
Sayuri-chan~

I like this fic ^.^ It's cute. Honestly, though, it's been so long since I watched Yu Yu Hakusho that I had to use Google to figure out who some of the characters were... How embarrassing.

Anyway, I like your grammar and spelling. And the plot, can't forget that. I love your plot. It's new and never been used before.

So... are you ever going to update?

srry i haven't seen any crossed over fanart. even though it would look really cool if my comp. did it i would make you one but sadly im not that privelaged

nice story. I like your approach. I would be curious to see a Kagome/Touya flirtation (don't see much on Touya and he is so cute).

Great chapter! I love this story much! It's unique and I can't wait to see how Kagome shows Yusuke up with her training...I'm sure she will take it better than he has...I can't wait to see how this develops! Update soon!
Sayuri-chan

This story is so cool. This one I can understand because it describes each person.I like how you describe the people and the settings. I can really visualize what's happening. Keep writing. Hope you update soon. And happy halloween.

Excellent chapter, what I wouldn't give to be her right about now. I'd have been peeking around the corner i think. As to the fanart I have some though my NC-17 stuff isn't posted online. I usually only attempt Hiei/Kagome though for couples shots. If you'd like me to send it to you drop me an email at EclipseKitsune@aol.com and I'll be happy to send it on. I occasionally also take requests for drawings so if you have a particular scene in mind you'd like done I could take a stab at it and see what I could come up with. If you'd like to see examples of my work, here is a link to my deviantart account. http://ryukotsusei.deviantart.com/ Great job with the story. Can't wait to read more. Update soon please.