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for To Find What Cannot be Found

by kagehoshi

person sesshysgirl08
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! AWESOME!! AWWWWEEESOM!!!!!!!! YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!! IM IN LOOOOOOOOVE WITH YOUR FICS!!!! you must be a tenshi sent from kami to write amazing stories that keep readers on the edge of their seats!!!! LOL!!!!! annnnnnyway....AWESOME JOB!!!!!! THIS IS AMAZING!!!!! please..im begging you...UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^ i dont think ill last too much longer without another chapter of this amazing fic! ariagato!! *bows* -sesshysgirl08-
person Sayuri-chan
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent few chapters! I somehow forgot all about this story and when I was going through my saved chapters of peoples stories, I found that I had only read 2 of them for this one, and decided to catch up. Its great so far, update soon!
Sayuri-chan
person Kagome
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They kissed that was so sweet. PLEASE!!! update soon. THANKS!!!
person UKK
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO YOU! I don't wear shoes in hosues either. Anyhoo, I love your stries, because you get all the facts right (and I should hope so!) and you develop it sooo nicely! Can't wait for your updates and I love the way you add little tidbits of information! Oh, what's a J-card? ANd thanks for the difference betwen shriens and Temtples! It really helps me in my stories!
person kougalover123
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapters. please update again soon, i can't wait to find out who Kagome is going to be with.
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my word I LOVE this chapter. I couldnt get through it without laughing hysterically and people kept asking me what the hell was so funny. Awesome work, I love the humor you put into it. I'm off to read the next chapter
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, Im glad to see that Keiko got put in her place. Yusuke needed some closer with her I think, thankfully Kagome was there to help him out. Though that was very evil of him. Leaving her to carry the bags lol Keep up the good work, please update soon
person ParalyticDawnfire (not logged in)
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, two updates in one! Okay, so technically it was only one chapter. But still.

Kagome has gotten to know Yusuke a little bit better. I wonder, who will come next? I'll just have to wait and see. And the Chuu thing was funny. I think we all liked that one.

Thank you for the cultural note. I wouldn't have guessed that, because in America, we sort of use both 'shrine' and 'temple' to mean 'church'. It's good to finally have someone who really does know what they're talking about.
person Kage Otome (not logged in)
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chuu!!! Wahahahahaha...I can picture that image so clearly in my mind...I can just imagine the types of pranks the guys have pulled on each other. *grins* Anyway, love Part 1, going on to part 2 now.
person Kage Otome (not logged in)
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with how you made Keiko completely, It never seems as if she understands or accepts him fully. Some Yus/Kag in this chapter, so who's it going to be in the next chapter, Kurama? I've noticed how you made the interaction with Hiei then Yusuke...Anyway, good Part 2. I think it's important to accept a person for who they are, not their, um...heritage. Anyway, great chapter! Thanks for clarifying the difference between Temples and Shrines, I think I forgot about that...My lessons didn't stay with me completely...My grams tried to teach me, but unfortunately, my brain has some trouble remembering all the time.

Keep up the good work!

~Kage