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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just want you to know, I have read this story so many times, I practically know it by heart. *Heavy sigh.* Your narrative style fills me with envy, as I eagerly devour each line. Every time I read it, I laugh to myself, thus disturbing my spouse greatly and causing him to make annoying comments. You mentioned in your A/N a while back that you had other chapters written, but since I haven't seen them posted, I must assume you just like to torture me. I absolutely love the Hiei/Kagome interlude, and hope there's more of that to come. (I always root for him to get her.) But the way you wrote Yuske's interaction with her makes me hope for at least a threesome. I also can't wait to see each of the others (at lest Kurama, Touya and Jin) have some one-on-one time. And after all of this is dealt with, there's still the coming threat, right? I sincerely hope you continue with this story. It's too, too good to drop. Please post more SOON! I will be your friend and loyal fan forever! (Also love "My Light") Oh! And if you're posted somewhere else, please tell me.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
as far as i know it has in fact ceased. it's been a very long time since the last update but i hope u haven't abandoned this fic. i've never seen a fic wrote like this (this style i mean) and find it to be a refreshing change.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story and i hope it'll be finished in the nearby future
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to see you wins Kagome or if more then one wins her.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story, and I am dying to see how it turns out! Please update!! I'm new to this site and have no knowledge of any disturbances. All I know is I love your plot and your character development , and I've got to know who you have have in mind for her to choose. (I vote Hiei.) If you're posted on any other sites, please let me know!!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing so far! I'm excited to hear more about what happened to Kagome in the feudal era, and learn more about the pairing. I'm not sure about the "fighting" - I'm just a reader, not a writer, per say, but it looks like things are running smoothly now, and I see that you have another story going, so I'm very hopeful that you'll pick this one up again some time soon. (also want to read new story though, interesting crossover)
Good luck with school!
Good luck with school!
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you handle crossovers! Just one small language thing though: when using the word quiet, as in silent or not loud, you are spelling it as quite, as in to a degree "quite enough," etc. it's weird, though, because you spell it right whenever you conjugate it!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW its awesome ^^ please contine this Story and update soon ^^ I Like your other Story were Kagome is blind very much too ^^ and hope you update this two soon. I waitet so long for a new Chapter to the Storys I `m dying here ^^ so please save me bevor its to late >.<
forever your Fan from Germany
Angelwings ^^
forever your Fan from Germany
Angelwings ^^
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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