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for Broken

by Xakana

schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have read this before and was probably remiss about reviewing and if not it deserves another. it's not just another 'love triumphs over all' even though it is, it's so much more. you had mentioned in your a/n that it was only part one of two. i hope your muses inspire you to write the sequel.

thank you,
ginny
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a wonderful tale, felt the desperation and sadness... a master artist can elicit emotion and feeling from those who view his or her work... in this you have succeeded.

thank you,
ginny
person rin.dee
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg.. too much emotion.
im sorry about your friend, i hope that you get ahold of her soon.
i hope you continue your story regardless though.
dont take it the wrong way, im not a selfish bitch who only wants the stories done, its just i know how you feel. and perhaps by writing it will take your mind of the troubles in your life. help you get away from reality for a while.
you're a great author and i hope you flaunt that gift by continuing your stories.
- rin.dee
person Redlightspin
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I ...I'mm not gonna cry (WAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!) that was so romantic write their happy ever after please
person Averi
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This seems like it could possibly be an episode if the writers ever get bored with everything to do with the feudal era.
person ny
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
upload soon
person bd84
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im too lzay to log in XD

so what made the well 'splode?
i really dunno what ot say about it cept that you did a really good job on it. I liked the ending best though, poor inuyasha!

btw, im never leaving without letting you know where i went again X.x *points* i stuck you number in my cell phone and wrote it on my wall just in case XD
person penpaninu
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good...long but good. (sniffles at the end)
person laniershazar
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an incredible part 1. You are an awesome writter and you blended all the parts perfectly. The smooth roll into Kagomes time.. incredible. I cant wait until part 2. great work.
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truly excellent. I really do hope that you publish part 2 quickly. There is so much potential in this plotline. Extremely well written. Thank you for gracing us with this piece.