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for If We Kissed?

by aoi37

schedule May 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Please update & finish soon!!!

person sdasdsa
schedule February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
sesshomaruandrin.blogspot.com
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person anonymouse
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a shame to see that this looks like it's been discontinued. The premise was really great, and that's coming from someone who normally doesn't care very much for fics set in alternate universes. Of course, it helps that the characters stay true to form, and sound very much in-character. And all the lovely witty banter floating around! And it isn't just another PWP! And I'm amazed that there hasn't been any actual smut at all. (This is a good thing, because it means that if/when smut is finally written, it'll be *amazing*) I really liked the edge you've given Rin in this fic. You manage to keep her playfulness and purity(!) intact, even as you have her being delightfully snarky and sexy. Bravooo.

Great fic. In the end, though, it's a little sad that we'll never see Sesshoumaru and Rin stop dancing around each other, huh? Hope you update this, someday!
person babe_galanime
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
continue plz.
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
continue plz.
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story soo much...your stories are great....keeps me on my toes, and very addicting...update them soon
person jenn2118
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait till you get to continue this story its so amazing!!
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In general, I'm not a fan of alternate reality fanfics, but this one has started out great. I'm hoping you plan on continuing the story. :)
person diego
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How can you cut a chapter like that...it so unfair..anyway i love you story so hurry to get the seven chapter ready and post early...
person babe_galanime
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue plz.