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by Hrtofdrkns

person Blayze
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another anti-rosary, pro-Inuyasha fic. Marvellous. :) I find it interesting how some people have issues with this fic. Actually, it makes me laugh. 'Wah wah this is unfair!' and so forth brings a smile to my face. :)

Rosary haters the world over, unite!
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its just really sad to see shit like this get so many reviews and hits over authors who actually have good work out there.
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fuck, ya! (this weirdly enough turned me on) I'm a sick puppy, but thank god someone did this! I commend you from the bottom of my boots. putting her hands on her head was a nice touch
person Cutemiko
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay first off, you really need to watch the anime or read the manga to know that kagome doesn't overuse the 'sit command.' alot of fanfic authors have her doing that but in the anime/manga she only uses it when he's completely out of line (like chasing shippo and trying to throttle him) or when he could inflict some danger onto himself and others and she doesn't want to see him hurt (like with koga or when he goes full youkai) or when he's just being a complete ass like breaking her bike (ep 160). second off, get a spell checker or a beta cause your grammar/spelling could use some work. and finally the whole 'humiliating thing' with the 'sit command' is not kagome abusing her power and she does treat inuyasha as an equal. she goes out of her way to help him and befriend him even when he is an ass at times. she's also a source of comfort (ep 30 something) where he says along the lines "when has it become so natural to have kagome by my side" which you would know if you paid attention to the anime/manga. but since you probably don't give a rat's ass and will continue to write 'fanfiction' i just hope it will be more along the lines of a 'story' than just tabloid shock value. that shit has already gotten old with "Hate"
person Doodler5000
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think those beads are the only thing I hate about the story. They might be helpful in certain situations (Movie 3, stopping Sounga from killing Rin), but they are used far too often in the series and ad nauseum in fanfics. Glad Inuyasha got a little Payback. Kagome is lucky he didn't do it publicly like she did to him.
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think cutemiko didn't like hate and is still taking it out on you. Inuyasha had the beads off through most of Swords of an Honorable Ruler and I think showed he didn't need them. He also seemed quite upset with her for putting them back on him.
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS ALREADY.

I laughed my head off reading 'smack!' over & over.
Just like the 'sits' in Hate...HILARIOUS! I don't like
the beads either. I almost NEVER bring them into
play in my fics & when i do it's not for the reasons
that people are expecting.

I find the sits demeaning to Inu. I despise the way
she sits him on a whim or in front of nobodies like
kouga. Grrr. To me, he's wild, free and beautiful
in the feudal era. He shouldn't be sat like just any
old dog.

Don't get wrong. I love Inu/Kag pairings. That's all
i write. But in my fics I refuse to let her humiliate
him with unnecessary sits. You brought up very
valid points about why you hate the rosary & i
completely agree.

I can't wait to read the next chap. It's about time
they all get it. WOOT!
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always felt bad for Inuyasha when Kagome sat him...AND he never ever rREALLY told her off. Also, he NEVER raised a clawed hand to her, and I think THAT shows how deep his feeling are for her...GOOD JOB!!! Please continue!!!
person Youkainu obsessed
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good work as usual, keep it up! Can't wait for another story from you!!!