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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shitty ending... its too forced when you say 11 months later she was pregnant and had a daughter... tooo forced
kind of like a quick ending due to writers block
kind of like a quick ending due to writers block
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Get a beta or ... maybe use spell check and grammer....
This didnt even have a plot to it... it was so OOC that i could just lie... like the train wreck... its just so horrible... but you cant look away... good for you, i couldnt look away.
This didnt even have a plot to it... it was so OOC that i could just lie... like the train wreck... its just so horrible... but you cant look away... good for you, i couldnt look away.
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what can i say? that was awesome!!!!!!!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I definitely lovd this! It was wonderful!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woo! looking forward to the next one
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what the hell? I can't even begin to count the problems with that. You need a decent beta...and you need one fast