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for Love Of Light and Darkness

by kimisan

person Kage
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They were caught!!! Mwahahaha! What will happen next? Dum dum dum..
person Kage
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh...I can guess what he's going to do to Kagome now...Naughty, Naughty Karasu.
person Kage
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad bad Karasu...Poor, Kagome, Poor Keiko...Poor all of them.
person Kage
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yukina! Poor Yukina, but I must say...I love this story!!!
person Doodler5000
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Try to ignore the nasty e-mails. You have given plenty of notice that this is a dark fic and what the contents are. I commend you for branching out and doing something different from your previous works. I enjoy your humor and have laughed out loud while reading your stories so I hope you don't abandon that aspect of your writing. By adding new elements to your style, you show growth in your writing.

I do have a question, but it is mostly rhetorical. YYH guys, YYH girls, YYH villians, YYH setting, and Kagome added. Shouldn't this be on the YYH site? Or maybe posted under both YYH and Inuyasha subcategories. I really think the YYH site needs a shot in the arm and if authors who write xovers posted them on both sites it might help.

Keep up the good work and I look forward to your next update.
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling things are just going to continue to get worse for her and the others. Just a feeling I have lol *Reclines back on the throne of Darkness* I like what you've done, each of the guys have to be beside themselves with worry. Good chapter, update soon please!
person chanda
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a really dark fic you weren't kidding. Kudos to you for writing it so well.

Chanda
person cj
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow intersting pairing poor kags is again gettin a bum deal hmm shudnt kagome holy powers be actin to agressively i thought it lashed out with large waves when she was very panicky at least kurama mum is ok i wud like to see a decent kurama/kags fic with no other ppl joinin in a 3sum with them cuz i havent seen many ones on here surprisinly nice chapters orginal 1st ive seen update soon ja ne xx
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, gotta feel bad for Keiko right about now. Yusukes gonna be pissed when he comes for her and sees what condition she is in. Good chapter, update soon please.
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good start to this story. Hate to say it but Yusuke needs his ass kicked. Baka male insulting someone he doesn't know. Can't say they're going to be too happy when they find out the girls are taken. Good first two chapters, can't wait to read the next ones. Update soon please.