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by Rinseternalsoul

schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 11-15~ Aww its sad what the rest of the party are going through. The little creature transforming was great. Hehehe on the dialog between Sesshoumaru and Naraku at the end of Ch 12 about her 'negotiation tactics'. Really good job on the 'tales' of this strange land. I love how Sesshoumaru always shuts her up with a kiss *snort*
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person chanda
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story kicks ass! please update soon.
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Snowfall
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was reading your fic last night when the usual 4:00 am maintenance came and I couldn't get connected. Well, I finished today and that was one amazing and very hot lemon. I liked the way you teasingly led up to it. Phew! So hot. Interesting storyline. I'm curious as to what Inu will think. I hope this turns out to be most hentai indeed! Great writing by the way. Oh, I thought it was very funny in the beginning when Sess though "She must die" LOL

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
person Snowfall
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG This was so intriguing that I couldn't stop reading. Such mystery, comedy, suspense...and Tala thinks he knows who she is?! Wow. This promises to be a very interesting story. I love how you are keeping them all in character, despite Sesshoumaru's growing lust. I just love everything about this story. Human bashing, copping a feel, and more. WooHoo! Can't wait til the next installment!

Snowfall