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Chapters 26-30~~Mmm the lemon and inu buffet, I would definitely make sure to stay and sample that over and over again. Ohhs the way he was talking to her when he was all demonic, that was HOT!! Wooowwees that made the blood flow to all the right places. Again the way you described the clothing was very detailed and wonderful. Ohh cliffy at the end there!!*swats it* Dayum Anubis is a hottie also. So many hotties... so little time~~Now I have to go read the other story with Anubis in it. Talk about sneaky, you have me hooked and wanting to go and read more about Anubis!! Wonderful job on this!!

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Chapters 16-20 ~~Your attention to detail is amazing. From the clothes everyone is wearing to the way the rooms look. *Snort* On getting her drunk. What a deliciously HOT lemon that was!! *fans self*

Chapters 21-25~~ Hehe.. I just loved seeing Naraku so happy. The conniving hot bastard that he is!! I just heart the dark hottie and all his badness. The fight scene between Sesshoumaru and Seth was great! I felt bad for Inuyasha again, having to go explain what happened to her Mother. I was glad that Ayame comforted him though. Ohhs now what is Anubis going to do? I am sure the dark hottie Naraku will be up to something again soon. Wows what a mesmerizing story this is!!!

^_^ The story was really funny, and I was laughing my ass off when sesshoumaru and naraku took their shirts off, and kagome was drooling. *Smiles.* It was really funny. But damn that naraku, he just had to go and be a tatle tail, and tell Seth. Grr I could just smack him, that is if i wasnt afraid he would choke me with a poof of miasma. *Shakes her head.* Naraku is a meany. Anyways, I think you did very well on this story, and its been really good up to this point. I was wondering also if you could email me when you finish the next chapter, I thank you in advance if you do so.

An absolutely excellent story! I wait patiently (barely) for the next chapter! I wonder if Kagome will get with Anubis? I cannot say I wouldn't find it intriguing. Thanks for the great tale!

great story wow its soo diffrent form other kag n sess fics i read being traped in an other world with nuraku omg poor them n just when kags n sess get together there's an other dog demon who wants kags too o.o plus his half bro who wants to kill sesshy thans wow wat a great story please oh please update soon i really enjoyed readiing it

Chapters 1-5 ~ Ohhs first of all~ Wahoo another story from you that I get to put my hentaified little eyes and hands on. I love the build up in this. The dialog from Naraku “Let the games begin.” Rawr!! Ohhs the 2 hotties was having jealous thoughts about each other!! *Falls off chair--the part about a stray.. haha (Huggles Naraku)*

Chapters 6-10- Ohss- haha Sesshoumaru copped a feel on Kagome!! The little creature is so intriguing and cute. Ohhs pyramids? Interesting!! Haha on the she 'was thinking'. Mmm the kiss and Naraku's jealously. Nice cliffy ending in chapter 10. Thank the stars there is more chapters for me to read. You really have woven a detailed story here. It is obvious that you have put alot of thought and work into this.

Please update soon.