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lol excellent story like ure others and an excellent ending XD

Ok, I have finished reading this story in two days. It is 2:27 am right now and I just had to write this. I don't know if your going to read this review since you have finished this story and started another, I haven't even read the other reviews to see how many reviews you recieved for this story, but in the chance that you do go back and check for new reviews like I do, well, I decided to write you. This story rocked! I like everything about it, even the portal thing like a star gate type of thing. Mixing the Egyptian and Japanese cultures together was also different. I really enjoyed your portrayal of Anubis. He sounded Hot. I also noticed that you had mentioned your husband in your A/N. This is the first time that I had encountered someone like myself who is married and spent a lot of time writing a story that their husbands whined from lack of attention. Anyway, I truly enjoyed this story and I love Tala. He's a cute pet in a foreign kind of way. :) I also enjoyed how Midoriko is a demi-goddess and was banished and that Kagome not Kikyo was a descendant of Midoriko, since the jewl was born in her body. Kikyo was only a protector, not an inheritor. I just like the story, I know I said that already, but I said it again.

Thanks for writing something so different and kind of sci-fi at the same time it was a breath of fresh air.

Ldymoon

Chapters 36-40~ OMR poor Naraku!! *Gets dust buster (again) to suck up dust particled Naraku. Will piece him back together later.* I know he had to die. Ohhs another great fight scene! Wahoo.."Whom do you belong?" Gawd that was so HOT! He is such a hot lover! Aww I loved when they reunited. (With her friends then her Family) Lovely ending, I am off to read the Epilogue now.

Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed

Epilogue~ Aww I really loved the ending to this. Yet another great story you have gave us readers. Thank you again for giving me the pleasure to read this wonderfully, well thought out story!

Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Chapters 31-35- Naraku has been busy. I figured he would do something to get Kagome. The Inuyasha and Ayame lemon was very HOT!! I was so glad to see him with someone. The battle between Seth and Sesshoumaru was really good. Ohhs I cant believe Seth is dead. Ut-oh I have a feeling the dark hottie is fixing to be killed. Wonderful chapters once again!!

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Hawt story.Update soon. ^_^

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?