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by Rinseternalsoul

person Kourui
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH AWSOME JOB WOOT WOOT! Hmmm I don't really like The Lady of the Inu youkais...theres just somthing about her...Hmm...Anyway awsome jb I loved it!!!


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Great the big Birdy is awake and his feathers are ruffeled *SIgh* ANyway awsome job...hm,mm wonder were Naraku has slipped off mto??? Anyway great job I'm off to read the next chapter!!!


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH WOOT ANOTHER AWSOME CHAPTER, *Gulp* Oh no now another bastard is gonna be after kagome, *Sigh* anywa awsome job!!!!! WOOT WOOT!


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW AWSOME JOB!...Hmmm Sesshomarou is an animal LOL ^_~ SO unfair LOl j/k j/k awsome job on this chapter and the lemon! WOOT!


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! Wow awsome job, LOL Poor Sesshy he unknowingly being torchered ^_^ Awsome job I loved this chapter,...hmmm were did naraku wonder off this time???


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH! Awsome first chapter woot! Great ob I'm loving it! WOW this is great for a first chapter most of them really suck but your is great awsome job, hope the next chapter is awsome to!!!


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW AWSOME! WOOT WOOT! Great second chapter even better thatn the first, nice plot, and style of writting ^_^ WOOT!


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaa, *Sniffle* THAT WAS SO *Sob* SAD* WAAAAAAAA! Awsome job though it's kool you were able to move me to tears awsome job!!!!!!!!!!!


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW AWSOME THIS IS GREAT BEST PLOT EVER! WOOT! Hope the next chapter is just as awsome ^_^


Kourui
person Kourui
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was a great ending to the chapter LOL That was so funny, awsome job, Por Kagome of all the people ^_^ THough I wouldn't mind being stuck with Sesshomarou! ^_^


Kourui