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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!
I loved this chapter (when have I ever hated any of your chapters...? Hmmm... let me think...)
I couldn't decide if it was because of Keb's kawaiiness with her fathers or Sesshoumaru's intervention at the end. ^_________^ Rin is how old now...? I usually don't like new original characters introduced to any of my fandoms, but as I've told you before, a long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away, that I have truly fallen in love with Anubis. *sighs dreamily* I didn't think that it could happen again, but I've taken to Jiyuu as well. His sidestory with Rin has captured my heart. ^_^ I think you ruined my Kohaku-Rin ship. lol I used to be able to NOT stomach shipping Rin with anyone else but Kohaku before, but I now proudly wave my Jiyuu-Rin banner. Ah, you're the queen of new characters. I think I might have to rethink my stand on that one, or at least put a disclaimer to exclude yours. :P
Sesshoumaru's relationship with Kagome makes me smile. Anubis' jealousy makes me giggle. ^_^ I sort of feel bad for Anubis and would suggest perhaps making them share Kagome, but I can't see Sesshoumaru doing that... Is it cruel of me to wish for Anubis pining for Kagome forever? ^_^;;
A sibling or three for Kebechet would be nice. Inu no Taisho had two boys and I feel kind of sad thinking about Sesshoumaru having only one girl... I'm also glad that you reiterated your being a sap for happy endings, because I am too.
Tonikaku, this review is getting long. hehe. I can't wait for the next chapter! =)
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I loved this chapter (when have I ever hated any of your chapters...? Hmmm... let me think...)
I couldn't decide if it was because of Keb's kawaiiness with her fathers or Sesshoumaru's intervention at the end. ^_________^ Rin is how old now...? I usually don't like new original characters introduced to any of my fandoms, but as I've told you before, a long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away, that I have truly fallen in love with Anubis. *sighs dreamily* I didn't think that it could happen again, but I've taken to Jiyuu as well. His sidestory with Rin has captured my heart. ^_^ I think you ruined my Kohaku-Rin ship. lol I used to be able to NOT stomach shipping Rin with anyone else but Kohaku before, but I now proudly wave my Jiyuu-Rin banner. Ah, you're the queen of new characters. I think I might have to rethink my stand on that one, or at least put a disclaimer to exclude yours. :P
Sesshoumaru's relationship with Kagome makes me smile. Anubis' jealousy makes me giggle. ^_^ I sort of feel bad for Anubis and would suggest perhaps making them share Kagome, but I can't see Sesshoumaru doing that... Is it cruel of me to wish for Anubis pining for Kagome forever? ^_^;;
A sibling or three for Kebechet would be nice. Inu no Taisho had two boys and I feel kind of sad thinking about Sesshoumaru having only one girl... I'm also glad that you reiterated your being a sap for happy endings, because I am too.
Tonikaku, this review is getting long. hehe. I can't wait for the next chapter! =)
xox
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wonderful i love this story.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you so much for updating. I was soooooo happy to see this when I signed on. Ohhs I am jealous that you got to play with Anubis. Ya know--- him and Sesshoumaru are so yummilicious, and if they... Opps...*Shifty eyes*-- -----Hehe, Kebechet is sounding just like Sesshoumaru, with the ‘This Kebechet’. That was so sweet with her helping Kagome.--I adored how Sesshoumaru stepped in to help Jiyuu and Rin, so they can be together. Another awesome chapter from you! Wonderful job as always!!
~*Tainted*~
~*Tainted*~
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it! And yeah! Jiyuu and Rin can finally be together! Joy!! More please!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was great!! I love the fact that Sesshomaru stood up for Rin's man. Excellent job on the chapter, sis. Have been so damn busy writing chapters that now all I want to do is put my head down and sleep, but this story caught my eye, and damn it, I was determined to read it. So, here I am, reviewing this wonderful chapter. Excellent writing as always.
Take Care,
Hentai Sis
Take Care,
Hentai Sis
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice one! that was funny! i do have a question..will sess and kag have other kids? kind of lonely for kebechet to be an only child plus she's not the heir to the western lands right? i'll be looking forward for your next update..have a happy thanksgiving!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoot! get off work to find a new chapter. Wahoo! An excellent one I might add. Can't wait for the next one
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is hard when they grow up. Wows -what a temper tantrum to have! Hehe, I could see Kouga with 7 kids! Oh gawd oh her blowing that candle out, and getting cake all over Inuyasha. Then Sesshoumaru's comment--"That is my girl." Snort-That was priceless! Wonderful chapter!--Ohhs can it be? Wahooooo I am the 100th reviewer, again! Congrats to you on 100 reviews! This is such a breathtaking story!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That´s great you brought out a new chapter. Was to busy to review, but now I am going to read it and enjoy ot. How I wrote more then on one occassion, the story is impossible good.
Linda
Linda
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story you have here. Don't think it's ever been done before. Also very well written. Unfortunately, because of your skill as an author, I have been infuriated with Anubis for the entire story. I guess a large part of it is due to the fact that I relate to Inuyasha personality wise and hate it whenever he gets shafted in a story. I totally think that Anubis' destruction of Naraku was the cheapest thing ever and that coupled with his obliteration of everyone's normal lives has made me hate his character. Right now, the best ending for the story I can think of is Sesshoumaru finding a way to kill Anubis, preferably with Inuyasha lending a hand. And BTW the line, "Sometimes he even managed to amaze himself with his strategic planning genius." Was the funniest thing ever. Mostly because I said pretty much the same thing while playing chess this morning.