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for As Death Gives Life

by Rinseternalsoul

person Mrs_Sesshomaru
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!! BRAVO!!!! This story is FABULOUS!!! What do you mean it's "winding down?" Oh no!!! But... They're like... like... family. Isn't somebody supposed to attack the Western Lands like Anubis predicted? Is it that one chick's (who cheated on her husband, who then got killed by Lord Buhito) sons? Okay & is Kags immortal now too? That would suck if her daughter & husband are immortal & she just dies of old age. Poor Kagome! What will Anubis say about her having a baby by Sesshomaru? Kebechet's gonna be a big sister! YAY!! Why doesn't she (Kebechet) use her power to bring Kags modern family to the fudel era for like 48 hrs just so they can see how Kags is living? Gramps would love that. Or maybe Sessy can visit the future... Nah, he might blow everything up thinking it's a threat. Hojo might stop by & Sess would turn him into goo. Great job! The usual: Update soon!! *lol*
person P
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! Kagome's pregnant with their second child!!! You just made me VERY happy!!! *twirls around the room with you*

Please please pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease let it be a boy this time, please? *HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGE PUPPY EYES*

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Hehe, Sesshoumaru eating ramen... it blows my mind. XD
person P
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darn, I hit review too soon. =_=

I hope you have a very prosperous and happy new year!!! ^___^

person angelfighter
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Thanks for the new japter. I just looked ot over (and later will read it slowlier so I can enjoy it more). What a great idea with Shippo changing. This was interresting. I also enjoyed your lrmon. It was great as ever. This is definitly one of my favorite stories. Kebechets wisdom is so rare, but her words are always true, like she would speek from years of live-expirience. I guess this comes from writer, huh? (LOL). That Kag could visit her family was so touching. She wasn´t home for so long. I bet her mother was crazy from worry. I don´t have childrem yet, but can imagine how terrible it had to be if you loose one of then, even worth if you don´t know what happened with it, is it alive, is it happy, is it suffering. I thind the last is the most evil of all, this is the thing that can bring every mother to the knees.
I am a little sad that this is comming to an end. This I liked sooo mich. In first it was how Sess showed his affection towards the pregnant Kag, then how he behaved during the labor, much later what he had done for Rin and her mate. Oh, that pleased me that they are mates. Sorry i didn´t write his name because I was afraid I would somehow mange to write it completelly wrong.
Whatever comes next, it will be good because it is from you. How I wrote you, I never read something bad from you. Every single fic you wrote was good, amazing in how good it was written and joyous as well. I was very happy what you wrote in your authors note. That you love writing and reading. The reading I love too (writing is new for me you know, but I really enjpoy it, only since I have found out how to change the keabord to english on my pc. The grammar program and a dictionary were installed too. Not on this one, but another, which is not connected with internet, this one is full. LOL). Soon, I hope I will start to read Hose of Lemons. I am so excited to do it, I can bareky wate.

For all about christmas. I know what you are speaking about. This is the time for cooking, bake cakes and buying presents for the family as well as the visits you have to make. I understand fully you hadn´t time for writing. I guess it was much more time taking since you have your own family. I had only to help my mother with the preparations and was busy beyond imaginable. That you updatet so soon amazed me (in positive of course) and so long chapter. You are really great.

I wish you a happy new year 2006, have fun and take care of you.
And once more thank you for all, for your stories, your encouragements and help I have received from your attachement you send to me previous.

Bey Linda
person Elisa
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter, it was so sweet. I'm so glad that Kagome finally got to see her family again. And Shippo's finally an adult! YAY!! Now he can really get back at Inuyasha for all those times he picked on Shippo. Anyway, I hope that Kagome and Sesshomaru's second child is a boy *hint, hint* LOL Update soon!!! ^_~
person lost child
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
k, I'm gonna say what I said out loud when I read that last bit there. "woah that was unexpected" but wahoo! another child, I was beginning to wonder if they'd have another one. Dang ur good at this story. Keep up the good work
person mrs sesshy
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well worth the wait! such a heart warming chappie... i wish i can see my mom again too
can't wait for the update with sess jr hopefully...
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was soooooooooooooo very happy to see that you updated. Your breathtaking writing always inspires me to dabble! --Now some maybe happy for that, and others will be like--ack-run for cover. Haha!~~ I loved when the girls went home, and Shippo’s transformation. I fell off my chair over Sesshoumaru’s announcement! Wonderful chapter. Thank you!
person Mimi
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! I read it on other sites and reviewed under different names. I was shocked to find out that Anubis was peaceful and Sesshy is okay with Rin and Jiyuu. CONTINUE!
person Inukamisashi
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome!!! Pls write more!! Pls continue! Pls don't stop!!!!