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for As Death Gives Life

by Rinseternalsoul

schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo i can't wait!!! i really enjoy this story but i feel bad for anubis... well anyways update soon!
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Tainted Dreams *swats log in box*
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wows -The way you describe everything is amazing. You put a lot of detail, time consuming work and thought into your stories and it shows!! Ohhs HOT as hell lemon!! *fans self and shifts in chair* Dayum, you really can write some hot detailed lemons! Congrats on your nominations!! Great chapter!!

Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed
person MidnightTimberWolf
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I loved the chapter the lemons are well done in every chapter. I have to say GREAT JOB!!!!
I can't wait to read another chapter so hurry up and write one....
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi on the eating or raw meat. *Ack* OMR those chicks are awful. Poor Jaken! Another hot yummy lemon between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I love the relationship that is building between Rin and Jiyuu. Great update!!

Tainted Dreams aka used to be YoukaiObsessed
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 25-30~~Hehe I loved how Sesshoumaru was so intrigued by Kagome's bra and panties. Ohhs when Sesshoumaru spanked her for acting childish, that was great and quite HOT!~~ Hot lemon between Inuyasha and Kat...wooweees!! Ohhs when Sesshoumaru said this line--“I eat disobedient miko’s.” Wows *fans self* Then onto a hot as hell lemon. Such yummy hotness!! Great chapters!!
person Ashley
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It...was....AWESOME I LOVED it. Keep up the great work! *Coughlemonscough* Can't wait till the next chapter!
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 19-24~~ Haha- poor Sesshoumaru, having sooooooooo many people around him now. Ohhs I love how he is seducing Kagome. OMG those 3 kids are so bad!! Ut-oh Anubis is really becoming quite jealous of Sesshoumaru. Great chapters once again!!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 13-18~~ Okay you made my eyes orgasm again. Woooweees on two hot ass lemons back 2 back!! *turns fan on* Wows the details on those 2 lemons. So very yummy!!-----I felt bad for Kagome when she realized what he did for her. Wahooooo go Sango!! That was great when she took him down! That was sweet Miroku and Sango getting married. Aww that was sad when Anubis faded away from her.. Gawd I want to keep reading more but I have to go to work. *Wails and swats job* Well I will have something good to read tonight after work--These were mesmerizing chapters that are so beautifully written