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for As Death Gives Life

by Rinseternalsoul

person Paris
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Hentai Sis---awww! It's a girl! Girls are so fun!!! And what a perfect name.. I was really off, huh? hahaha. It didnt even cross my mind to look up information egyptian godhistory. Looks like I am not on top of things at all, hehe. Hmm. Now I am very curious as to what the baby smelled like if it wasn't inu. Could it be HUMAN>! dun dun dun. haha. I'm probably way off again... OH! And most of the chapter with the description of child birth... its not really going to be like that? is it??? you'd probably laugh if you could see me while reading because I think that my eyes grew rather large my face was very serious through out the whole thing. Really? That bad? I think that I might be terrified now, lol. One of my good friends is due this week for her first baby and was planning on having a serious talk with her about how bad it really is, hahaha. But wow.. Yep. Still in shock. Great description though!! Can't wait for more!!! --Paris
person Sei
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, considering i cant review this on a single spark, i'll review on here!

(thanks, by the way, for sending out that email!)

i'm sorry for not being able to keep up with this story, Spanish 4 has been overtaking all my time.

anyway, amazing last few chapters! just....wow! it's around 11 pm here and i'm about to fall over, but....this story just keeps getting better and better. it cant be that she was born, nooOOooo, she had to be something other than Inu XD of course. just keeping it interesting! wonderful job, every chapter beats the last one, making it one incredible story.

-Sei
person labelle
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww so cute
person Arryelle
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow well that was eventful lol. I loved it, all the drama lol but dun dun dun The little Goddess doesn't smell like an inu and whats up with the red line what could this mean lol we shall find out in the next episode of 'As Death Gives Life' by Rinseternalsoul soon I hope

Loves Arry
person Elisa
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story! I'm glad the baby is a girl, I was hoping it would be. I feel bad for Anubis though, he's so sweet and he wont be able to see his daughter that much. Good thing Sesshomaru is there for her and Kagome! Update soon!
person lehcar132
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful : )
person SilentDeath
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shakes her big ass* "Its a girl! Its a girl!" *does a stupid dance* "Oh Yeah!.....Oh Yeah!" Great chapter! Keep it up!
person AW555
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, update soon!
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again another great chap. i hope that there is sum more action next chap but anyways update soon!!!
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha- On Sesshoumaru having to go get food for her cravings. Wows on the way you wrote the birthing process. Soooooooooo very realistic! Ohhs on that cliffy there. Wonder what is going on? Lovely writing and a beautiful chapter!!