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for As Death Gives Life

by Rinseternalsoul

person monecque
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
at first when i saw this story i didnt know if i would lile and then i gave it a chance.
i am hooked and cannot wait for more you weave an exelent yarn and i am devoted.
i am glad to find your story on this site cause i was reading it on a single spark.
may the heavens pour out insperiation apon your head.
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let me start by saying, awsome chapter. I loved the birth chapter and I love the party chapter. Great job, girl. I can't wait to read the next one and I am sad that it is coming to an end, but you probably already have something delicious planned for your next story. Talk to you later.

Hentai sis
person hieisgurl
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
in chapter 10 you should have had inu go northeast and then have anubis point southwest
person psychobookcollector
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. And, I love how you had Kagome get a little mouthy during her labor. I remember that with my 1st daughter. lol It is completely understandable. And I'm glad that Anubis got to hold his baby. Now, if we can get him, Sess and Kagome to get along a little bit. lol But, I would be a bit ticked too if that was what a gorgeous God wanted me for, a breeding cow. But hey, I think I would try to have fun with him for a little while. winkwinkknudgeknudge. bad, Maggie, bad. poor little hentai brain is at it again. love the story. take care
person sesshysgirl08
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! AWESOME JOB WITH THESE LATEST CHAPIES!!!! OMG!! THIS IS AMAZING!!! I LOOOOOOOVEE! THIS FIC!!!! i always say this but....omg are u friggen amazing or WHAT!?!?! my goodness...ur writing is just all out excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im in looooove!!! full blown, head over heels in love with this fic!! you are just wayyy to awe-inspiring!!! writing this amazing should be baned!! wait! i take that back...then i would live a boring life without my favorite author and her awe-inspiring work. what kind of life would that be??? anyway.....AMAZING JOB!!!! THIS IS JUST TOO GREAT FOR WORDS!!!! im almost speechless...key word..almost. haha. jeeze!! i cant explain how amazingly excellent this fic is!!!!! its just fabulous!!! no no wait..i have a better word..FANTABULOUS!!!! hahaha!! i could go on and on but this must be getting really annoying so.....AWESOME JOB!!! please oh please ooooohhh plllllleeeeeeaaaaassssseeeee update sooon!!! thank you. *bows to the ground and kisses feet of the amazing author*
person Vicky
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! You're KILLING me!!! Not an inu!? OMG! Must know! Love the name and how you got it btw. I'm so going to kill you for just leavin us fans hangin like that! Omg!! *sits and waits for next chapter* *rocks self* its ok its ok it'll be here soon....must not attack for new chapter....
person *~stephanie_008~*
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just caught up on the last 3 chapters^_^ All excellent, very excellent! And the pup's descirption is absolutely beautiful as well as the name.
person Malitia
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w000000t! i was hoping for a girl with silver hair! yay!!!! god... u made that sound so horrible i never want to have children.. is that wat its really like?!
jesus i couldn't imagine doing it... i'm scared now.. behold the nightmares of being a woman... man.. women get the shit end of the stick eh.... damn all those men!!!!
awel i didn't mean that hte whole chap was horrible when i said that.. i mean.. it just sounded so gawd awful painful is all! ahhhhh~! anyways the chapter was really good. i was waiting for anubis to show up somewhere in there. w00t. i kinda feel sorry for anubis... poor guy.. he got fucked over in the end cus he fucked someone. hahhahah too stupid i am. ok here is your mission. update the cahpter... and let me read. do'nt ever let me get devestated about hearing that ur story is gone.. jesus i search on google to find it. thank god for the email. phew. update soon!!!!!

malitia
person wynter89
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was amazing, i always thought the child to be a boy, you had me thinking. i cant wait for more. i just cant wait for you to write more. you do know that you can probably write a book/novel!!! when i was reading this i thought that this woiuld be an amazing plot for a book/novel. it is by far one of your best work. ok well this one has some pros over the others, but they also have some pros over this one, hard to judge which one is besser. you know what i think they are all great.

good luck
may kami-sama with you
person Danielle
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU!!!! could you have at least said what the child smelled like, nnooo..."...she did not smell like an inu" ARGH!!!! Anyway i love the latest installment, can't wait for the next, cause i really want ot know what the child is!!!!