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damn, Yusuke really stuck his foot in it this time didn't he? I'm surprised Keiko didn't attempt to cave his skull in lol Hiei better come back soon or Yusuke's going to decide that Kag's shouldn't have to wait on him and try for her himself. I look forward to the next chapter, update soon please.

I'm glad that you are continuing this story. I really enjoy it. It is just like Kagome to be completely oblivious about Yusuke's attraction to her. I kind of feel sorry for Yusuke since Kagome is also the type to be really loyal to those she cares about. The only thing I don't understand is why Hiei left her in the first place, is it out of respect for Yusuke's mark - a youkai thing? Then again I also feel sorry for Kuronue for liking Sango, but not being able to do anything about it. Looking forward to reading more...

Ralina

I see Yusuke-kabobs in the future... I think I also see bat-tartar... Their both playing with their lives, I sure as hell hope they know what they are doing. Good chapter, update soon please.

OMG!!! I loved the Sango/Kuronue fluff in chapter 3. Please write more. I'm hooked.

Whoa...Kuronue's getting gutsy! That's not going to do his hormones any favors! I think it's going to be up to Sango to put the breaks on this one, cause it seems like Kuronue's fighting a losing battle. Great job, keep it up!!

Wow! Yusuke's days are numbered now! I wonder if Koenma will bring him back to life again? Even if Kagome gets over her anger and forgives him, when Hiei comes back and finds out about it... ugly things will happen. Then if he finds out HOW it happened I don't think there is anywhere Yusuke can run to where he will be safe from the wrath of the fire koorime. The jagan will find him and his dragon will incinerate him - I just hope Hiei is understanding to Kagome about it. That was a really sweet scene with Sango and Kuronue as well. I'd fall for him in a heartbeat. Then again, I have a soft spot for Kuronue in general. Gotta love the bat wings. lol

Ralina

Who did Kuronue say was playing with fire??? Looks like he'll be the only one to get burned after all!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next, I hope that he and Sango are very strong willed!!!

Chigirl

Ohhh that just makes me so mad... Baka Yusuke.. Baka Hiei.. Baka Kurama.. if there ANY males out there that aren't complete idiots at the moment? Need to thrash all three of them... Poor Kagome, I can't imagine how she must be feeling right now. Good chapter, update soon please.

Yeah, I guess I shouldn't be surprised that Hiei didn't take it well, but Kurama's just being a dumbass again! These people would be so much happier with a little good ol' fashioned communication. *Sigh* But, I guess what makes you the Queen of Misunderstandings...(Did I dub you with that? Cause if I did, I'm proud--it's an apt description). You know, I think I'm sensing the beginnings of a couple of double matings here. Am I right? If not, you should consider it. Hell, then everybody's happy!! Not to mention the fact that it's really hot. Anyway, great work--keep it up!!

Yay, you updated! Damn, Miroku's getting a bit overzealous in his gropings, huh? Hmm...this wouldn't have anything to do with that accident involving his eye, would it? And I see Kuronue might be having a bit more difficulty controlling himself than he'd like to think. And here he thought Yusuke would be a bigger problem (of course he may yet be). Oh, when Kurama and Hiei get back they're gonna be pissed--I can't wait! Great job, great chapter; keep up the good work, and please update soon!!