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for Returning Forever

by kimisan

person Tarren
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I am not liking the whole consumating the mark thing with Kag and Yuk!!! I mean is Hieni and kag going to get together or what?!! Or even sango and kur?!!
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good ol Kuwabara to the rescue. Well, at least the girls are free. Now if only they can get the guys to stop before they kill each other. Good chapter, please update soon
person Tarren
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH! I DO like the story update soon please!!! thark you
person EatAPeach
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...so I'm just a little confused about this whole Hiei thing. I guess he just decided to pitch that whole 'being dishonorable to touch what another demon has marked' thing right out the window! The dumbass, he should have stuck around to begin with! Wonder what Yusuke will have to say about this one. Nice to see that the unknown evil is more than just a sticky puddle of goo now. This should prove interesting. Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
person EatAPeach
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I guess that whole hoping they would forget their differences and rescue the girls thing just isn't going to work out for them, huh? Good thing Kuwabara came, too--for once he's not the dumbass! Great work, please update soon!
person EatAPeach
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Yusuke--that really has to suck! I totally knew what was going to happen just as soon as I saw the title for this chapter! Great job, I'm anxious to see more!
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of all the stupid, moronic, idiotic things for Yusuke to do! *Beats him with a stick* damn BAKA!! How stupid can he possibly be?? *Kicks him* I'm almost wishing Kagome would purify his ass now *Shoves him down the stairs* And now what's Hiei going to think? He's probably gonna make Kagome feel like a whore because of Yusuke's stupid mistakes *Strings Yusuke up by his intestines* Baka baka baka!! That's Hiei's woman you stupid toushin! *Pants heavily* Ohh I wanna kill him... Can't wait for Hiei to get ahold of his butt. Update soon please.
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kagome does tend to be.. a bit dense at times doesn't she? Yusuke better be careful or he's going to find himself skewered on Hiei's katana lol Good chapter, please update soon.
person EatAPeach
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was...intense. Hiei's going to blow a gasket for sure! And I wonder how much longer Kuronue can hold out, his self-control is already waning. It may not be long before he's in the same boat as Yusuke. Well, very nice chapter. Please, update soon!
person Chigirl
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to think that Yusuke should just stay away all together and how long is this supposed to last anyway??? The thing is can he control himself, same goes for Kuronue! If they don't hurry back soon, they might just find themsevles womanless!!! Would it be wise for Kuronue and Sango to be friendlier!!!

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