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for Returning Forever

by kimisan

person EatAPeach
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah! Sango kicks so much ass! It's about time she put them in their place! I love it--PLEASE update soon! I have to see their reaction to all this!
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD LMAO Inu's going to hit the fucking roof. *Snickers* Can't wait to see the guys reactions when the girls make their appearance. And how is Inu going to take seeing Kagome reunited with Yusuke and Hiei? Oh I can't wait. Update soon please.
person EatAPeach
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Inuyasha gets a free trip back--I love it! Great job! So glad to see everything coming together. Good to see those boys learned a thing or two, now let's just see if the lesson sticks when the girls come back. Good work, please update soon!
person Ralina
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Your creativity astounds me sometimes. I loved how Kuronue told the facts straight - not letting misunderstandings ruin everything. I also loved how Sango exploded. If it were me, I wouldn't have lasted as long as she did personally. Also, having Inuyasha appear at the end was pure genius, things are definitely going to blow up with him around. All in good fun though, I wonder if his rosary still works? It really stinks that it took their deaths for the boys to get a clue though. Looking forward to more,

Ralina
person Sango
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! Sango told them off. XD. they deserved it. Please hurry and update!!!!
person Chigirl
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inuyashaaaaaa!!! You go Kagome, I'm sure that shut him up! What will the others reactions be when they find out that the the girls lived? Will Inuyasha throw a monkey rench into Hiei and Yusuke's plans? Will there be some sharing going on? God I hope so!!!! Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens my Queen,

Chigirl
person Chigirl
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is the same demon, it doesn't seem like it. Hopefully the others will find them in time
person Chigirl
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good for Sango!!! It's amazing that Kagome hadn't before when Hiei called her a whore, but what will happen since she just told both men to fuck off??? Will Hiei and Yusuke stop arguing long enough to find out what Kagome really wants??? Please update soon, can't wait to find out what happens!!!

Chigirl
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad bad Hiei, dammit why must he treat her so? Did she piss off some major god in her former life and now it's decided that it likes to torment her? I can't imagine how terrible she's going to feel after this. Good chapter, update soon please.
person Chigirl
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did he od that just to get back at Yusuke, and if so that was pretty cold hearted, whats next for our heros' I'm dying to know!!! PLease update soon!

Chigirl