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for Inuyasha: A Fairytale of F***ing

by Fingerme

person fallenangel7583
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn. you know, there are a few of those unwritten areas in fanfiction that people won't go. like making someone ride thier knee....or thier own ankle. stuff like that which people are afraid to write about (but will participate in) just cause they fear what people will say. props for going there. hoenstly, that was some serious hot smutt. i was so happy to see that you did another chapter to this. getting yura in on teh fun ey? be a little creepy...but a lot better then the alternitives. man, i am so looking forward to seeing waht you will do with this story. you really seem to have no limits and that makes this fun. dont' be afraid to go wild cause i think you really got yourself a good audience with this. keep it up!!
person tdaCallie
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word: INCREDIBLE!!!!!!! That was a really nice job. May I put in a request? *puppy dog eyes* I'd love Sess to get into the action somehow. Anyways, great start on what is sure to be a hentai epic. ^_^ Plz update soon!
person chocolatte
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nononono! please no threesome. just keep this strictly inu/kag please. as for request, yes, the in water love-making sounds divine. anywho, someting funny about the "hey take off yer clothes" part will be just great.
guess you know alresady that i think this is a great story!!!!!!!!
person Jessica
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum. Random episode sex. ^.~ Reading lemons is a healthy habit... And I think I've taken a liking to yours. A threesome with Yura? Should be interesting... Good job.
person beccapatty
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome! awesome! Awesome! i love em.. soo far ur storys a gr8 success! hehe idk about addin yura tho.. shes a god awful wench.. maybe u could have inu punish Kagome for fallin back down the well back home.. he could punish her by making her watch him pleasure himself but not letting her touch him at all! and when he finally cums sayin her name.. shes throbbin with need but he doesnt let her do shit..by tyin her up so she cant touch him or touch herself... then only after she and him kill Yura does Kagome get her reward.. her and inu can 69.. that way she can blow him off why hes eating her.. such a nice chappy hehe.. either way i love the sex scenes between inu and kag.. but also as a request if at all possible id like it if Kag and Inu could eventually fall in love and be feircly protective and loyal to eachother.. that way they can eventually have sum cute lil pups and live happily! hehe anyways keep up the gr8 work i hope ya like my ideas..
person beccapatty
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one more thing for future pairings in the story i think ya should make a kag/inu/sess pairing.. Kagome Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are by far the best pairing ever.. besides the inu brothers are dog demons.. and the 2 dogs can share their mate..! :) oo and when Kouga enters he could try to screw kag but she wont let him but inu gets mad and has to punish her again.. oo and when Kikyo comes along.. Kagome gets to do the punishing! sooo sweet! plzzzzzzzzzzz dont do a Kikyo/Inu scene.. i hate that pairing hehe thanks!
person Holly
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why not? Made me happy!
person swasdiva
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is shameless, hilarious, kinky, and I may love it. Nothing but fabulous smutty-smutt-smut! I do hope you'll include some alt. pairings in this addictive little debacle? I can think of a *few* things concerning 'pulling swords' in a certain demon father's tomb, an interrogation in the wolf's lair, or perhaps a new way to introduce the traveling companions (maybe minus shippo, unless you're into that sort of...thing). Regardless, please continue! It's fab so far!
person drake220
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
honestly, this was an odd odd thing. But i liked it! Especially the ending! hehehe! Please let Inuyasha have a threesome with Kagome and one of her modern friends.
person darkjakken
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that is so fucking good!! lol...Make some more ;D