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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I couldn't help but notice in chapter two, that you made a reference to Gravitation, I think. Eiri Yuki is quite the popular romance novelist. Pity he's gay. Hmm... cliff hanger at the end of chapter three... you better update soon, so I can find our what happens.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh oh oh! Please! write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, this is getting pretty juicy! Update soon, this is great! X3 EM
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH *coughs* that was very good pls update soon this is...*thinks* .....awsome no its better then awsome better then great mmmm damn whats that word ~_~ i need sleep next time ill give a better review ps THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FIC I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR ONE LIKE THIS *gets hit over the head by her freind* o_~ ow
Storm ~_~m
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE *gets wacked in the head...again* X_X oro
Storm ~_~m
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE *gets wacked in the head...again* X_X oro
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-falls out of chair laughing- didn't see -laugh- that ending -gasp- coming.... -hysterical laughter- oxygen... I need oxygen. But he... excuse me SHE would look hot as a girl, and yea i'm bi and if it bothers you, fuck off
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!? Ok, I was not expecting that last sentence. Haha this is a cliffhanger that is going to drive me crazy until you update again.
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::howls and whistles:: Great ficcy so far. Update soon k?
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF!
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa. that was a good one! update soon!!!! i want to see thier reactions!!!! yey!!! is this m/m/m? cause it should be ;) i can't wait for the next chapter!! i hope it's longer too!
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, they NEED to have sex. As for Kouga waking up, he can join in later when he feels better. Good story so far. Basically I'd make two criticisms. One being that once you allude to a plot device, don't overuse it. Continued mentioning of a "secret" with Inuyasha is straining the text. The second is that dialogue, especially internal dialogue, consisting of "did I really just say/do that?" can be just as tiresome and unnecessarily become dead weight to a written work. Otherwise wonderful story so far. Update soon.