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for Unforseen Love, Kilala's Secret

by Kama

schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story keep it up. whens next chapter coming out?
person ChaosD
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. Cant wait to see more, where its not just a dream. ^_^ Update soon.
person Backlash Wave
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooo awsome. If you like Inuyasha/Kilala then check out Atropa's story Kilala's Secret. She's a genius. Anyway it's about 17-18 chapters I think. I was going to read it for the third time soon. Anyway please update this or write more Inuyasha/Kilala stories.
person janomaru
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
person HimeAndi
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea, but you need help with grammar. I am not trying to be mean, I will correct the work and email the corrections to you, so you can update with a better, easier to read version. You have good ideas and a nice grasp of plot, and this is in fact an excelent start. I hope you don't mind, I just want to help (and wish others hand helped ME when I first started, gah what messes I made!)
person Knight2
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intresting idea, even though Atropa has fic kind of like this one.

But still, I'm intrested to see more.
person chad
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic you should make a few more chapters