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for Business Blues

by Ramichan

schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, please update it soon.
person jin
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story.hope you update soon! :)
person srg1
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great work! I like this story alot! Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I had so much fun reading this! I haven't read fanfiction in months, so it's a wonder that I just happened to decide to tonight, and found a genuinely good story, like yours. I really love that your story is so entertaining, and contains all the elements that a story should, instead of focusing on just drama or whatever (I'm guilty of that, i'll admit). Anyway, this is a really great story, and for the first time in a long while, I'm actually bummed that there's not another chapter out yet for me to read. I love the relationship you've created between the two, and how all your characters are really believable and generally entertaining! Great job, and please keep up the good work, as I can't wait to read more!
Schrodinger's Cat
person Nichi
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's funny, intimate and flows amazing well. The characters are all together in the sense that they are believable and true (even though you went a little crazy with Mirkou). But yeah this is one of my favourite new stories of the season. Your doing great. Keep it up!
person Nesel
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start on this story. You should write more chapters!! ^___^
person me myself and i
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
huh .. this story reminds me of something .. i think i read it once .. on mediaminer? can that be??
well ... just wanted to tell you that it´s great! i really like your writing style and this story seems to be very sweet, but this isn´t just a one-shot, is it? hopefully it´s not because i really really realyy want to it to continue, i mean such secret relationships won´t stay secret that long and just to see inuyasha jealous is a good read, afterall i hope that he loves her (that´s also a point because i want to read more .. i´m not quite sure for their feelings for another..) and love means possesion, she is his as he stated in his last comment^^ .. also a sweet flashback how this ..more ... intimate relationship started would be nice, not that i tell you to do it or something . just dreaming a long..
ok i´m never good in writing short reviews and sadly the longer ones are worse *sigh* i´m sorry for the mistakes and hope you can understand everything ^__^"
PLS! update soon .. it´s a very very very good story!^^
person penpaninu
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! update pleaes??
person gitelbug
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this i hope you continue