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for Complicated Childbirth

by fadingsun

person Anon
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
also: you need to change the warnings on this, i wouldn't have read it if i had known you were going to off someone ... :(
person Jade
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, such a terrible cliff hanger! this story seriously has me on the edge of the seat!

Personally, I don't WANT any of them to die...but logically the one to go would probably be Inuyasha. Just because...well, come on. lol. Maybe the pup, too...but I think he would do fine. Sigh...this is becomming such a sad fic.

When this is all done, I think you should write a side-fic about Inuyasha's time with Naraku. It would be interesting, to say the least--and people always review torture stories! That's if you're feeling up to it...
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:( Awwww, don't kill him!
person Kiara
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story but please don't let Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha or the baby to die. Killing any one of them would be really cruel and horrible. I really want a happy ending even if it means they will suffer during the story horribly. If you really want to kill someone kill Kagura and/or Kanna. Bye.
person loke
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you tell me that you're going to kill of Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru? Please tell me that you're not serious? AHHHHHHHH!!!! Please no! You are a great writer. I totally love this story, please don't make me cry at the end. Why can't they be together. Okay...I'll calm down, hehe...chill. I'll respect it, because it's your story, it's really good. I have to say, one of my favorites, I just hope that you don't kill sesshy or inuyasha. That's just sad. Just wrong.
person loke
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't kill the baby, their son. Sesshy or inuyasha will not be the same!!!! Kill of the bad guys, maybe kagura.
person Erik
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If either Inuyasha or the little one must die, it should be the little one. I feel awful saying that, but at least in such a case, they can try again. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru could try to have another pup. But I would love it if both Inuyasha and the pup could live. I can't speak for everyone, but it would be soooo sad if one of them died
person Twilight
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! That was powerfull stuff. My heart is still beating fast. I'm not a huge fan of death fics, especially where babies are concerned, it just seem fair somehow. It is your fic however and if you say someone must lose their life so be it. I hope your other readers can give you an answer to that question.

Please e-mail me when the next installment is complete.

Twilight
person Fluffy\'s Mate
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO DEATH!!! COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I don't want anyone to die!! SHESH!!! I've been reading this long.....XC'''
person djl
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool chappie as all of the others... if someone must die... please kill off the pup...if Inuyasha or Sesshomaru died that would be really bad in my opinion... anyway please update as soon as possible... I cannot wait to see the next chapter so do not forget to send me the link. Thanx very much