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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, why not NO DEATHS..Great story and that one part about Inu dying and telling Sessu to remarry totally made me cry...
Ohh, It's BEEN a LOOONG while since you've updated, haven't you??
Anyway, hope the next update wont be tooo long...
I mean, i know you're going tooo TRY too kill off Inu or Sess and that's just boring..Why not have a happy ending..Why going the other way???
Ohh, It's BEEN a LOOONG while since you've updated, haven't you??
Anyway, hope the next update wont be tooo long...
I mean, i know you're going tooo TRY too kill off Inu or Sess and that's just boring..Why not have a happy ending..Why going the other way???
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to say this is a great story, I'm a bit perplexed that some one has to die, I read thru the Reviews
Some say use the Tenseiga
But I remembered that in the story...
"Inuyasha knew all along that Sesshomaru adore children although he never admitted it. Hence, this request was a surprised but not unexpected. He could still clearly remember that fatal day when Rin and Jaken were absorbed by Naraku when she attempted to retrieve Tenseiga for Sesshomaru while Jaken tried to protect her.
Not only did Sesshomaru lose his Tenseiga to Naraku, but also loss the two people he greatly cared about."
He kind of lost it in chapter three. Though I do think I like the one reply that stated someone other than the Two fathers and new-born should die, Kagura..
I give that person points.
If I had to choose someone to die, which I rather not, id say someone needs to pop up and help and die defending to two lovers.. Anyone.
I don’t remember who all is still alive; maybe kouga can die honorably saving them in the nick of time.
(Assuming he is still alive in this fic)
Personally, I think the fate that has been set and playing out should have some form of pleasant ending.
As stated in other reviews, and I agree, If inu die Sess will follow, and vice-versa.. They can't die and it be only one death.
i think someone else would be best. Maybe when they get to the mountain it can have a different affect and heal Inuyasha, you can twist it to be a bad thing and make it heal to fast having Sesshomaru no choice but to hurt inu to save the baby from being crush in-between (in and out).
I don’t really know, I’m not a good writer, in fact I can’t write to save my life.
Though I really enjoy this story, it will be sad if one of the three dies in the end.
But please don’t stop on account of me, I will read till the end.
Keep it up, you are an inspirational writer.
^_^
Storm.
Some say use the Tenseiga
But I remembered that in the story...
"Inuyasha knew all along that Sesshomaru adore children although he never admitted it. Hence, this request was a surprised but not unexpected. He could still clearly remember that fatal day when Rin and Jaken were absorbed by Naraku when she attempted to retrieve Tenseiga for Sesshomaru while Jaken tried to protect her.
Not only did Sesshomaru lose his Tenseiga to Naraku, but also loss the two people he greatly cared about."
He kind of lost it in chapter three. Though I do think I like the one reply that stated someone other than the Two fathers and new-born should die, Kagura..
I give that person points.
If I had to choose someone to die, which I rather not, id say someone needs to pop up and help and die defending to two lovers.. Anyone.
I don’t remember who all is still alive; maybe kouga can die honorably saving them in the nick of time.
(Assuming he is still alive in this fic)
Personally, I think the fate that has been set and playing out should have some form of pleasant ending.
As stated in other reviews, and I agree, If inu die Sess will follow, and vice-versa.. They can't die and it be only one death.
i think someone else would be best. Maybe when they get to the mountain it can have a different affect and heal Inuyasha, you can twist it to be a bad thing and make it heal to fast having Sesshomaru no choice but to hurt inu to save the baby from being crush in-between (in and out).
I don’t really know, I’m not a good writer, in fact I can’t write to save my life.
Though I really enjoy this story, it will be sad if one of the three dies in the end.
But please don’t stop on account of me, I will read till the end.
Keep it up, you are an inspirational writer.
^_^
Storm.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if someone has to die, don't let it be inu or sess! They've sufered enough! please update soon.....
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOO! PLEASE don't kill them! I beg of you, after all this torture the least they deserve is a happy ending.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would say that it shouldn't be a death fic. i say that because sesshomaru has the tensiage. if inuyasha or the baby die
he would be able to bring them back. Right! i say that because i don't like death fic. there too heartwrenching especially
when you want the characters to be together. but if he can't then it would (i'm sorry to even say this) but i would say
the child. you may think it's cruel but he will be able to have another and hopefully they will know about a C section.
he would be able to bring them back. Right! i say that because i don't like death fic. there too heartwrenching especially
when you want the characters to be together. but if he can't then it would (i'm sorry to even say this) but i would say
the child. you may think it's cruel but he will be able to have another and hopefully they will know about a C section.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very intense. God, I never thought that I would say but I’m glad that I had kids before this fic came out. Excellent work! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to it. I'm not giving my opinion of the character death (only if you don't get a good reader response).
Nemesis ^_~
Nemesis ^_~
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o! MORE*zombie* MORE!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't want either of them to die!!!!! If you have either of them die, the other will most ashuredly follow. If Inu dies, Sess will follow him. If Sess dies, Inu is far too weakened to survive the trip back to the castle alone.
This story is compelling in a strange way, and I have enjoyed reading it. Especially the interaction between the two fathers. I think I would also like a clearer telling of the back story that is mentioned in the previous chapter.....but not if you kill one of them off. :-(
But realize that I will read and review either way. Thanks for writing and thanks even more for letting us know when you have updated!
Caitriona
This story is compelling in a strange way, and I have enjoyed reading it. Especially the interaction between the two fathers. I think I would also like a clearer telling of the back story that is mentioned in the previous chapter.....but not if you kill one of them off. :-(
But realize that I will read and review either way. Thanks for writing and thanks even more for letting us know when you have updated!
Caitriona
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think the baby should die! I don't think Sesshomaru or Inuyasha died, they should be badly injured but not killed. I think it would be better if the baby died, and they find out Inuyasha is not able to produce anymore children. Well anyway that's my idea, I hope you update soon!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what? are you serious? shit! death? damnit! :(