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for Complicated Childbirth

by fadingsun

person Jade
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to thank you for taking the time to send out an email for the updated chapter. It was very kind.

I liked this chapter, it was long (which is always a good thing) and the detail was amazing. You seem to have looked up the medical terminology for this fic, which always makes it an interesting read. Although the concept is really out there (I've never been one to read MPreg fics because they just seem too unrealistic) you geared it up to the point where it was easy to ignore that fact. Congradulations.

As for the whole "who should die" situation, I think that should be entirely up to you. I know the readers are important, but you have to keep in mind that it's your fic. Above the readers, you are the one that has to be happy with it. You should just do what feels right. If you had an idea in the begining of the story, maybe you could go with that. Keep in mind that no matter what you choose to do, there will always be those people that don't agree with you. But that's something you'll have to be willing to ignore because, despite the people that don't like it, there will always be those loyal fans that do like it.

Haha does that make any sense? I think I'm ranting.

Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope you have a happy holiday, too!
person Jade
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me here, again. Haha. I was looking over your AN again, and I thought I would answer one of your questions. If you killed off the pup, it would still be a death fic, yes. I believe so, anyway. The pup may not be a main character, but he is a character, and I think that's all that matters. Also, just because he's not a main character, doesn't mean he's not important to the plot. Because, if you get down to it, he could very well be the most important character in this story. That's the way I see it, anyway. Haha, I hope that helped you any.
person Twilight
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update. I find myself dreading and looking forward to them at the same time. Although, I know it's not going to happen, I wish they could live happy ever after with their son and have a castle full of babies. Alas it's not to be.
person PrincessSesshyMaru
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Don't kill Inuyasha. If someone has to die make it Sesshomaru. It would be better if you killed Kagome but since you wont. But it would be to sad if you killed their son and Inuyasha so kill Sesshomaru. It pains me but it would be so sweet if Sesshomaru died protecting his mate. :( ~PSM
person Carrie
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness, I don't think anyone should die except those annoying youkai who keep going after them! :( That is hard to even think about with this story, they've been through so much already, I feel they should all make it out alive....but that's just me. So I guess, I wasn't really any help, haha.
person petpeeves12
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
exciting! To bad Sess didn't think abaout giving him a c-section. Then again acording to these circumstances he wouldn't have the time.
person Snowfall
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, why does someone have to die? Obviously, Inuyasha is very close to death and would be the logical choice.

Snowfall
person dah
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if you absolutely must kill someone in this fic, then kill inuyasha. Because killing the baby would be too cruel, and killing Sess would prove no point. But your fic is very good, not something what I would read normally but perfeckt for this evening. And the way you have written it only makes it better. Do continue writing this, and other stories too.
person Aini
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::sniff,sniff:: please don't make anyone die!!! i want a happy family!!! with sess and inu and the baby!!!! please please please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! don't kill anyone!!! PLEASE SUN-SAMA!!!!... T_T... don't kill anyone!... it's a good story... relly good... great in fact!... but i've read too many death fic with sess/inu pairing... and i don't want it anymore!!!... could u give me a happy ending with them still alive and a family... with 2 kids... their son and a daughter later on mayb?.... that would b a nice story!! please Sun-sama!! ::bows low:: T_T...

Aini-chan
(loyal servant to sess/inu)
person Aini
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me again... KILL KAGURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KAGURA MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHE MUST BURN IN HELL WITH THAT WHORE KIKYO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... ::cough,cough:: don't kill anyone... except for Kagura... please Sun-sama! ::bows on knees::

Aini-chan
(loyal servant to sess/inu)