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I like the fic and all, but if you're going to kill off one of the characters, let it be Inuyasha. Sesshoumaru is suppose to have Tensaiga at his side. In the anime and manga, Sess always had it with him. Don't think me rude or anything. I just don't like fics with sad and depressing endings. Don't think I hate this fic, I'm reading it because I'm hoping that it will end on a some what happy note.

-----------------------------Becca

This is really depressing and incredibly painful.

You have talent, but I think you dragged the whole birthing thing out way too long. You can only have Inuyasha going through so much pain and agony and near-birthings and Sesshomaru battling so many demons and comforting him so many times before you being to loose interest.

i was so happy to see that the baby is all right but what
about inuyasha. you can't let him die now. not after
all the pain and heart ache . . .and pain that he went
through. i think he deserves some happiness. don't
you. but i still say it can't be a deathfic because of
the tensiaga.

Fadingsun please please don't kill anyone off let someone help poor yasha and they just have the baby then you throw in that the placenta hasn't come out that's all right I love been scared to death and I have never wanted a pairing to have a happy ending such as this in fact.....when you said that there might be someone to die it dawned on me I have never read a story like that and I don't want to so please with sugar on top save everyone ok we all wanna feel happy happy joy joy thoughts....ok Please update more I know I will be waiting with baited breath to read more much more about this great story and remember don't kill anyone ok........

Hey, great chapter! You wanted to know if the baby's death would make it a death fic and I think it would because as I see it the whole fic is surrounding the circumstance of his birth. However, I still don't want any three of them to die. Anyway, its totally up to you about who dies since its your fic and you have to like your writing first. So, yeah, please update soon. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Awesome chappie! I really liked it.. and it looks like inuyasha is about to die.. poor bastard. :P Maybe I shouldn't be so happy? Anyhow, I really liked the hole pup and sess scene, and this chapter was as good as the ones before, or even better. Thanks, and please update soon! :D (and about the death fic vs. non death fic, not every story have a happy ending. Of course people like happy endings, but this style of fic you have created, it wouldn't not suit very well. And if you kill Inu yasha (as it seems now) it will truly affect Sesshoumarus mental situation, and you can use that to sequel. for instance: What if Sess truly loss his self? and do not take care of the child? What if Sess would think that inuyashas death would be the kids fault? Or what if sess would become ultra protective good father, but the child would crave more? And then Sess would have to ,for example, remarry?)

.... does that mean that Inu's going to die? *ssad face* how sad...

Excellent work as always...

I can't wait for the next chapter. It seems that Sesshomaru & Inuyasha are having some problems with the birth. You have more twists and turns than most plots I've read. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

First of all, I would like to apologize for my one review where I was talking about the update. I did not mean to rush you. I just was anxious to see the next chapter. Second, really good chapter... I cannot wait for the next chapter.

You caould make another story with all of the back ground story and how all of this happened.