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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh this is amazing i cant wait for more
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I can HONESTLY say I'm MENTALLY exhausted from reading your story. :-)
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to say that I have found your story to be a very interesting read. It is rather gory, but I’m not so much opposed to that. You have certainly spent a great deal of time researching the birthing process, so again very impressive work in that respect. At any rate, I did notice one little item about the end of chapter six. Your statements about the birth of the placenta not happening, or not occurring before Sesshoumaru cleaned up Inuyasha has a small flaw. Specifically, the umbilical cord should still be hanging out of Inuyasha’s anus, unless somehow it managed to retract back, which …yeah. Plus with Sesshoumaru having done all that cleaning up, he would have definitely noticed. Just something to think about.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Almost to bloody for my taste but I like it, its defently diffrent which is always a good thing. Cant wait for your next chapter
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is whoa and it was intense i did like it and i would love for u to continue
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"death fic" means ANYONE dies in this sense! PLEASE!!!!! reconsider! I beg of you!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will Inuyasha die. Please no!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good as usual. I am glad to see that you are going to continue the story. Obviously you have still left the ending very open to the idea of someone dieing. In my opinion it would make more sense for someone to die but of course it is up to the author. I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What?
Death fic? Oh crap!
Well, the baby better die, not Inuyasha otherwise Sesshomaru will kill the baby and that would be quite an odd plot.
Now, I sense you will kill Sesshomaru, after all there is no ultimatum-requisites about his death. His death would not induce anything such as Inuyasha killing himself or the baby...Inuyasha would just move on.
Crap...death fic. Kill the baby and if possible, write a sequel where Inuyasha gets to give birth to cubs with a sort of happily ever after ending.
Death fic? Oh crap!
Well, the baby better die, not Inuyasha otherwise Sesshomaru will kill the baby and that would be quite an odd plot.
Now, I sense you will kill Sesshomaru, after all there is no ultimatum-requisites about his death. His death would not induce anything such as Inuyasha killing himself or the baby...Inuyasha would just move on.
Crap...death fic. Kill the baby and if possible, write a sequel where Inuyasha gets to give birth to cubs with a sort of happily ever after ending.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok....by the way, great fic. Lovely, erotic, hot.
This is a real mpreg fiction, in other words you do write about the birth.
Not like other fics where the father gives birth in one second and that is it, the end.
I mean, births hurt and last a while..let's get real.
I love it, good job. If you are going to kill somebody....Kagura or Kouga then, not the family.
This is a real mpreg fiction, in other words you do write about the birth.
Not like other fics where the father gives birth in one second and that is it, the end.
I mean, births hurt and last a while..let's get real.
I love it, good job. If you are going to kill somebody....Kagura or Kouga then, not the family.