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good story. But I think sense Inu is a herm you should say shi or hir instead of he or him

ewww...but VERY interesting.

no NO you can't let anyone die do you know how long I have waited for this and when you were wondering who or if someone should die I was one of your many fans tha said on in fact begged that you let everyone live I have not read such an original story please please don't kill anyone I want to print this story out I couldn't bear to print it if shessy inu or the baby dies let the bad guys that are after them die its tooooo pretty don't do this to me and I don't get to a computer to often I come to this site to see the end of your story a good ending please with sugar or whatever topping you want on top don't do this for the love of pete (and I don't know a pete to speak of so thing long and very hard ok...........)

keep going with this story please! I love it

Omg! I just got done reading this, and my heart is hurting. Nobody can't die! After what they've been through....no! You can't do that! :( Well, I hope you update soon, I'm really looking forward to the ending....

Omg...I hate this story! I mean I love the writing and stuff, but it's too sad, WAY too sad. T__T

Hmm,comes maybe a third of the way describing a real birth pain set.Trust me kids,adopt....are you that geneticly perfect anyway...so many parentless kids always and for ever,selfish breeders.Stupid drs that won't let one tie ones tubes.This is one weird fic,hardly gross at all.Why the hell not absorb the kid?Jeez.You know in brazil et all police hunt and kill street kids for sport and to control the chaos.Thank you Catholic Church for no birth control,guess they need a fresh supply of alter boys.Don't get me started on aids and how most women are still slaves...on a less strange and lighter note anyone see the comercial where a women is filming her husband give birth as he screams and curses her.So kawaii!Ha!I love that actor,he is so IC.thanks for story.Sess is very um.inventive isn't he?

Wow! That was great! A cliffhanger! OMG! Hurry up and update! Is Inuyasha gonna die or not! And what about the child? What's his name? UPDATE SOON!

love this story i hope that you can finish it very soon.

Thanks for updating on your story. I read it! It was awesome. Sad but good. I realized that you really are going to kill someone off, so I won't push for a different ending. Even though I have no saying in your decision, and even though I love Inuyasha to pieces, if I had to choose, I would want Inuyasha to die.

Why? Well, because that way Sesshoumaru will always have a part of Inuyasha with him in there son. And he can still have an heir to raise as the ruler of the Western Lands. It sounds heartless, but Inuyasha will always live in their son, Sesshoumaru will have comfort in that right? Besides, if Sesshoumaru were to die, what would happen to Inuyasha and the pup, they are to weak to help themselves. And Sesshoumaru is the likely person to rule and raise their son.

Besides...I always wanted to know how Sesshoumaru would act if Inuyasha were to die.

lol...I got carried away.

I know it's not my decision. But I hope you...hehe..nevermind.

I just love your story.