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for Complicated Childbirth

by fadingsun

person nicole
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter. Very Intense.
person kiotana
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!!!!!!!!
i have reviewed and i was happy about an update but you really got to update !!!...........again!
person Atocha
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll give you a review just dont kiddnap the fluffy one!!! Inu Yasha needs him right now!!!
person yoblossom
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you evil evil evil person! you can't just let Inu-Yasha stay like that! he need's Shessy! Bring him back! right now! i'll still be reading, ause i wanna know what happens!
person Rawben
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, it's hard to keep sess in char, but i think if he kicks some serious ass soon then that'd be good. is the demon coming up a bad guy? sess can kill him. ;) great chapter! and i really liked the part about the baby's blood...interesting...
person yoblossom
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh! please write some more! i love how shesshy is acting, but i wanna rad some more! pwease!!
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Anonymous, the reason I took it down was because I prefer not to have vulgar language in my review. Degree of vulgar language varies from people to people. For my case, I can accept it within the story but not outside the context. You are always welcome to submit another review. No hard feeling and thank you so much for reading it.
person kiotana
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
theres nothing wrong with him being protective and caring about his mate so go on plz!
update sooon!!!!!
person Anonymous
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fadingsun, you didn't have to take down my review! I was only stating the truth!
person Saiyanluver
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happens next?! Come on!!! You have to update this soon.