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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it please write more love it you are awesome I just want a health baby I'm on the edge of my seat now....Can't wait till you update again........Please keep up the good work...
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I found your story again! :D I thought I would never find it until I stumbled upon it! YEs if you would please emial me when you update! Please! Poor Inuyasha I hope him and the pup will end up ok.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey! great chapter! but poor inu!! ...ouch...
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was good! Please update soon!!!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Never read a birthing of any of Inuyasha's children before that was so detailed. It was intense. Good story. Can't wait to read more. Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are totally in there. It's cool that their first child is a boy, that way they have an heir. Totally waiting anxiously.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what!!!!! i am not calm now! you must update!
and i think the reason it was taken off ff is because there was too much graphic...ppl keep telling me that so i guess it must be true. what a rip off!
and i think the reason it was taken off ff is because there was too much graphic...ppl keep telling me that so i guess it must be true. what a rip off!
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way the you wrote this fic!!! It's the best!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It would be nice if you explained the situation before jumping headlong into such an unnatural theme such as male pregnancy. I mean, even the yaoi is really forced and stilted. Unfortunately, most of the readers are in the 13-to-15 range and as such are incapable of commenting maturely about this fic. In all honesty, it needs work. A lot of work. I suggest getting a beta. Keep writing though, you can only get better.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that's a amazing story.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter! i really like this... but i dont know why... is that strange?