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for Complicated Childbirth

by fadingsun

person kiotana
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol u cant buy me
love this. im no expert in bio so im a little confused with the body parts of the inner mle but yay! the heads out! finaly!
person petpeeves12
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the email! Ouch! Poor Inu!
person yoblossom
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will inu be all right?? and yay! the head's out! that's good, right? loved the chapter
person Sinoa
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love the story. please hurry up with the chapter...and i am also very glad that you are honest and tell your readers when the next chapter will come out. that is cool. please update and i'm not usually like this i'm just tired.
person Fyre Faerie
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do so love this fic! I love mpregs and this fic is one of the best in the fandom! Can't wait for more.
person einld
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeesss!!!!! please i want to know when the next update of this fanfic......i can never get enough of those two pairings!!!

i love how the plot line is goin....ummmm but how you describe inu giving birth....its kind of giving me 2ng thoughts of bein pregnant....@,@ but thankfully i have years (well not that much since im in uni) till then.

you definitly make this realistic,......i feel for poor inu.....i cant bellieve u have sess tell him that he was going to push the baby in!! yeah i can clearly see inu's reaction at THAT statement.

ja

and keep writing *^_^*
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I see that you combined some of the chapters. Excellent work! Also, you've added some things as well. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully, everything will go well w/ the birth but something tells me that InuYasha has a long road ahead of him before the pup is born. Please don't let anything happen. I'm a sucker for happy endings.

Excellent work! Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Rei-Sama
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love it. Having had a child myself, you are really right on it there :) can't wait for more :)
person Japhia
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAATT???!?!!!! Push it back in? I suppose that would help in repositioining it but he could really hurt Inuyasha by doing that. I think this is a great story. I don't see a need to tell why they are mates. They are what they are and that's all. Please continue. I love reading this before work.
person djl
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story... what happened with ff.net? I was wondering why your story disappeared... but anyways please update soon because this is a really cool story