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for Complicated Childbirth

by fadingsun

person Ragdoll
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love it! Can't wait for more hehe please add me to the update list if you have one. My email addy is color_me_complicated@hotmail.com as listed above. Thanks!
person ruciel
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg..dat was soo good. I loved the build up towards the end. Keep on going!
person glaze
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please come on you leave me hanging like this come on write more darn it?
person Twilight
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm a big fan of mpreg and read as much of it as I can. I can honestly say that I have never read anything like this before. I feel like I'm right there. Feeling the pain and smelling the blood. All I can say is WOW and keep up the good work. Please e-mail me with all the updates.
person Deity
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the story is amazing. Please continue......I really want to see what happens next........
person BloodySuzuka
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor inuyasha...Well anywho, update soon, Its really awesome....like it already wasnt from teh beginning...Stupid spelling habbits
person sesshyslilsecret
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEEP ON GOING!!!!! I WANT TO READ MORE, though the storty is making me fear childbirth, KEEP ON GOING,

sesshyslilsecret....
person 118Pixie
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooo!!!!! pleaz im begging you! finish this story! its so good! and i, along with the rest of the women reeding this fic, are getting stumoch cramps ;). really its a greate fic and i cant wait for more. (please excuse my lacking of spelling abiletys :p)
person djl
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man just had to leave it there didn't you? Oh well very intense chappie.... I love it... anyway please send the updated chapter to me please.... thanx
person loke
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a terrific chapter. It was very detailed. I have to admit that was some good writing. It took a while for you to post, but the chapter was worth the wait. It was totally intense. I was so shocked at the drama of the whole event. I can't wait to read more. I have to say that this male pregnancy story is the best I've read so far. Trully wonderful. I feel for Inuyasha...I really do. I have to ask though, did you have to research in other to write this story, you made some specific medical details there. Probably just talented huh? lol. Well...either way, you're still good.