AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Complicated Childbirth

by fadingsun

person Michelle
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It took me a little while to decide what I think is going to happen...Well, it seems like no matter what you do, Inuyasha's going to die...It will be very sad, but why can't Sesshomaru just use the Tenseiga?It's just not fair that no matter what someone has to die!It's unfair!But...I guess if someone has to die, make it Inuyasha.Sesshomaru's too strong to die and even if their son dies, Inuyasha's proably in so much pain that he dies anyway.That's my opinion.
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear glaze & djl,
If you had noticed, chapter 4 was posted on 19 Oct 2005 which was less than a month ago. I'm not sure if there is a standard practice for fic update but I'll try my best to keep it within a month; plus & minus a few days. Nobody said anything when I'm updating it weekly for earlier chapters so I seek your patience if I need more time to work on it.

Maybe I had not read enough but this fic is one of its kind. I do not have any sample fic for reference thus I need to do a lot of research, understand the medical rationale, twisted it & fit them into this story so that it makes sense to you & to all my dear readers. All these take time, honey. In additional, I still have projects research, part-time job & a real life to juggle.

djl did stated that my chapters was too short in one of your ff.net reviews thus I tried to write longer but writing takes time, not to mention inspiration as well.

In my opinion, responsibility of authors is to complete the story & not left it dangling in the air, without a conclusion. Responsibility of readers is to be understanding & give constructive feedback so authors can improve to write better stories. This is a two-way traffic. You will know what I mean if you are an author yourself.

A good review can definitely encourage authors to write more & better but a non-constructive review can seriously damp the mood. Inuyasha is taking a 'break' now that the head is out so let me catch my breathe too, kay? If anybody wants to discuss this further, feel free to drop me an email.
person djl
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey what is taking so long? First of all, you left it at a really good part, and second you take forever to update... I am at the edge of my seat here waiting for the next chapter... I am a very impatient fanfic reader so we must speed up the process... if you know what I mean... anyway please update as soon as possible
person glaze
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on fadingsun more more more chap up please this is so good .........
person sam
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inu, mean it sound sooo painful...please keep writing, i want to know in its a boy or girl and if Inu dies, but lets hope that he and the baby live or i might cry and get very violent.....thanks again ^^'
person kougas_gal333
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz continue soon i want to know what happens
person Whitehtorn
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was... wow and eeek. Phantastic too. Please more.
person the mystical dragon
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor InuYasha.... I think I would have died on the spot having done that on Sesshoumaru's arm.... Anyway keep up the good work..... get that baby born
person kt
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...i've just read all 4 chapters and i practically cried when i realized there were no more!! i am completely captivated...great story :)
person Gerbil
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeeeezzzz!!!!!

Don't stop there! You can't stop there! What happens?! Are they ok?!

Gah!!!.... *thud*