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for Consumed By Dark Flames

by ryukotsusei

person Jinx
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that scene! I hope you put in another scene with Kagome and Hiei! I will be watchin for your update! Keep up the great writing!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Katzztar
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I felt as if there was no other choice but to give 5 +'s for a wonderful story that currently has only 2 chapter!
Not only is it well written but it is original as well.
While the Hiei/Kagome pairing is not original, they way you have gone about it is fresh. The fact that Youko Kurama is attracted to Miroku not Kagome or Sango is quite original and I like that twist.
Okay we know that Koenma already stated that Kagome will return to the future but what about other factors? WHat about Shippo? He would have died if Kagome never took him in, would Koenma allow Shippo to come with Kagome to the future?
person Suryallee
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reviuw? REVIUW?
I will give you a reviuw! I love this new story from you!!! The lemon was great and the entire story is simply wonderful! I think that will be a dark minute when Inu Yasha finds that out, but its his own failure. He better had treaten her in a nicer way, now thats what he got.
I cant wait to find out what Miroku will do with *his* kitsune, Loll!
Oh, and dont forget Shippo chan, I wonder how he will react to his *new daddy*!
person sendosha
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, I can´t wait to see the reaction from Inuyasha, and still it´s his own fault. Will you really pair him with Sango? I wonder who is the bigger hentai, Miroku or Youko. Can´t wait for their lemon.
person sendosha
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, I wish I could write like you. All your fics, and it doesn´t matter which genre, are really pleasant to read. I´m just curious about the pairings, I have a feeling that you will shock me somehow. Youko really managed to piss of Sango *snicker*. Great work, looking forward for the next chapter
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like you made your decision against a 15k or better one-shot. I think you ended this at a good place considering all you have written for it, though you did leave an evil cliffy. I love how you have this whole thing set up and I can't wait to read the lemons in all their glory. At least, you will be appeasing KougasHentaiLuvr with your long awaited Yaoi piece, ne?

Well done my friend. Another great piece to add to your collection.
person kimisan
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I need a shower now, that was hot. I forgive you for the cliffy earlier, you can keep Hiei for now. That was great.
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just love reading ur stories^_^ i really enjoy this first chap i cant wait till u update ^^ i feel sorry for poor sango n inu r they gonna be paired up with ne one???? i hope so they also need some happiness in their lives too. i sooo love hiei/kag pairings^^ please update soon
person Vivian
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No you didn't! Where's the rest = (? Thats it I'm taking Hiei back. How dare you tease me like that. I want more dammit! I beg of you, give me more! Was awesome girl. *Officially passes the crown back over*