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this is a great story, i wonder what will happen when kagome finds out about her aunt? please update this story soon.

nice story. a little "worded" but a nice read anyway. looking forward to the lemon and fight..

I like this story, i've read it since you started, just not big on reviews, but i'll feed you all the reviews you want if you update hehe, new chappie soon please!

snuggles and cookies, K.F.F.

I like this fic very much and I hope you are still planning on posting and continuing ths story, even if it is almost a year later. Well, I'll keep an eye out.

Awsome story! are you going to put the name of the new version in this story so we know what to look for???


Thanks

VII

Interesting chapter. THough a bit rambling. Also, I think it's bizarre that Kouga would care so much about what happened to the lovers. I mean, he used to EAT humans! GRanted, he might be insulted or offended, but that level of outrage doesn't make sense.

Interesting chapter. Perhaps a touch wordy.

Good start! Your english is quite good. Though in the first part, you said something about Kagome 'dawning on his pride'. I can't figure out what word you meant to use.

After Inuyasha told Kagome she wasn't his master, I really wanted to see her reaction.

UPDATE!!!

Sinead: YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!!!!!! YOU MUST! YOU MUST! YOU MUST! YOUR WRITING IS SOOOOO GOOD!! English may not be your first language but your writing is better than many of the people that do have that as a first language. Sorry if that's kinda a run on sentence, I'm not totally thinking correctly, your story ended! You must write more! It's too good to not write more! It's awsome, the plot is great! It got a little confusing after Sesshoumaru took InuYasha into his castle and stuff with the flashback, but once I thought about it, it made sense. Okay, I'm going to let Kry talk too.
Kry: -_- Thanks, you took everything I was going to say, Ned. ANYWAY! I second the things Sinead said. It's true about the language, you're better than most English-speaking people. You absolutely must write more. We were freaking out when it came to an end. Please update soon. By the way, do you hate Kagome? If you do, ME TOO!!! Anyway, your writing is awesome and if you don't write anymore I'm going to................ ummm......let's see... possiblities.... ummmm...... DIE! YEAH, THAT'S IT! I'M GOING TO DIE! Do you want to have the knowledge of the death on your hands because you didn't finish a story? YOU MUST! YOU MUST!
Both: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Sinead & Kry